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Caribbean Stage

Caribbean stage
water, wind and waves perform
island audience

8-14-18

Tania Kitchin, Water Themed Haiku Poem

11th gradeseawaterwindhaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

August 30, 2018 at 5:09 PM

Hello Reason A. Poteet, yes the islands would be the audience. Very clever my friend.Have a nice evening my friend.

Paul Callus

August 20, 2018 at 4:11 PM

Your imagery captivates, Reason. Nature is a fount of inspiration. Congratulations on your fine win. // paul

Susan Gentry

August 17, 2018 at 7:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Lovely haiku

Line Gauthier

August 15, 2018 at 1:06 PM

Lovely imagery, reason. Congrats on your win.

Reason A. Poteet

August 15, 2018 at 3:24 PM

thanks, Line. appreciate your time.

Jesse Rowe

August 15, 2018 at 9:46 AM

A unique perspective and great poem. Congrats on your top finish.

Reason A. Poteet

August 15, 2018 at 3:25 PM

I welcome your comment; you are thoughtful, thanks.

Eve Roper

August 15, 2018 at 9:43 AM

Beautiful imagery, Reason, congratulations on your fantastic win. Eve~`*

Reason A. Poteet

August 15, 2018 at 3:26 PM

totally unexpected; some haiku-fans disregard 5,7,5 as "old". Personally, I think the modernists have degraded the whole thought of haiku but cutting back. Thanks for the neat note.