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Careless Words

I was careless and lost your love or does it only seem that way words can be weapons can you forgive me darling for I will never find another like you I see us dancing under the stars as the music wraps around us the promise between us delicate as a flower I am full of regret and sadness tears rock the ocean of my sleep have you really let our love go or does it only feel that way the days are lonely and lost melancholy daggers of pain pierce my heart I am lost in a sea of nameless faces just waiting for your voice weeping my regret I hang my head like a dying flower can still see the pain in your eyes I just want to hide myself away the phone is ringing, ringing or does it only seem that way hello hello can you forgive me I blurt out your whisper . . . yes and my heart is a sea of tears tears falling mine and yours and again the sun is shining bright and clouds sail across the sky or does it only seem that way . . . ___________________ March 21, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/careless words Copyright Protected, ID 03- 1339-824-21 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, It Only Seems That Way, sponsor, Kai Michael Neumann, Judged 04/09/2021 Fifth Place

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Date: 4/10/2021 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. The power words have on people. Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2021 9:29:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment on my poem, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 4/9/2021 7:00:00 PM
So delighted to have come across this heart searing poem. Congrats on your win, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2021 9:29:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for the congrats and the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 4/9/2021 6:39:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 4/9/2021 12:00:00 PM
Janice, thanks so much for the congrats and compliment, love _Constance
Date: 3/22/2021 1:53:00 AM
Wow! This is something else, Constance. "I am lost in a sea of nameless faces just waiting for your voice weeping my regret" Incredibly heartfelt!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/23/2021 10:56:00 PM
Caren, thank you for the compliment and comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/21/2021 2:35:00 PM
Your poem tugs at my heart strings, Constance. Everyone makes mistakes. Forgiveness is sometimes hard to find, but it is always the best way to move forward. Beautiful, Hon! Best wishes in Kai's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 3/23/2021 10:57:00 PM
Carolyn, thank you so much for the nice comment, appreciate the compliment, hugs _Constance
Date: 3/21/2021 11:25:00 AM
Constance, this is an absolutely exquisite expression of how one feels when they love deeply and fear they have lost it. The heart aches...and then time..."or does it only seem that way?" Thanks for sharing these thoughts. Oh, and GL in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/21/2021 12:29:00 PM
Milt, thank you for the great comment and compliment and encouragement _Constance

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