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Careful What You Wish For

There once was an ambitious man named Eddie, who wanted a job in the traveling industry. The genie granted his wish, but Ed never expected this; an employer's note saying, "Welcome to the DMV!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/2/2013 4:03:00 PM
Midas all the way... or part of the way!
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Date: 7/4/2013 4:09:00 PM
Cute and funny :-D Made me smile. Thanks...love Roobs :-)
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Date: 6/12/2013 9:48:00 AM
HAHA! Eh, genies never play fair now do they? Just wish for a thousand wishes and you'll be good! Poor guy! Awesome write, Timothy!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:11:00 PM
Isn't that one of the rules about things you CAN'T wish for (yes I am taking advice from Aladdin).
Date: 6/11/2013 10:02:00 PM
This is an adorable write Hick. Good limerick! AO
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:10:00 PM
Apparently Hick is my new nickname... not sure to be delighted or annoyed (just kidding!). I like the non-sense poetry forms every once in a while!
Date: 6/11/2013 7:31:00 AM
Poor fellow, tricky Genie!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/11/2013 10:11:00 AM
Genies typically aren't very straightforward... ha ha.
Date: 6/11/2013 6:53:00 AM
Love it. Be careful for what you wish for you just might get it Thank you for your comments on The Way of Life
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/11/2013 10:10:00 AM
Anytime, my friend. Thanks for always stopping by!
Date: 6/10/2013 3:27:00 PM
He got off easy Tim, it could have been, "Welcome the the DMZ". which to be honest was what I was expecting hmmmmm, trust me. Take care, Richard
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/11/2013 10:10:00 AM
Not sure what the Z stands for... but if you say it's worse than the DMV it must be pretty horrible!
Date: 6/10/2013 9:26:00 AM
HA!!!!!! "Now serving number zero", said the new hire to self.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/11/2013 10:09:00 AM
So that does that make the new hire a negative since he's BELOW zero?... LOL!
Date: 6/10/2013 6:12:00 AM
Ha ha! This is a glorious write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a lovely piece this Limerick truly is! You have surely impressed me by this humorous poem! Great Work!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/11/2013 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Russell!
Date: 6/10/2013 3:57:00 AM
ty for the smiles Tim much enjoyed Shadow
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/11/2013 10:08:00 AM
Happy to be of assistance :)