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Careful Observation Required

careful observation required Spring belied its name used to jump out around the side of my cottage with yellow crocuses, made by sun for sure, and white snow drops their drooping blooms peek from leafy blankets. this year I caught it. its very beginning slowed by arctic lips blowing cold kisses whistling up frigid winds.

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Date: 8/12/2017 12:49:00 AM
Hi Patricia, brilliant work again. Did you catch yourself out trying to catch the Spring?
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/12/2017 1:03:00 AM
This time I saw it unfold at a pace I could follow. You are super calla.

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