Care

We are protetive right from birth
Of care there is no dearth
As they are most precious  gifts on earth
We feel such joy n mirth.

As they grow their demands increase 
Interest in us is on the decrease 
They do whatever  they please
Love for us  will slowly  cease

When from teenage  to adults they grow
If they care they don't  like to show
Wont share remain aloof even if stress they tow
Theres always crease on their brow

Its only when they have children they realize
How parents fussed  over their cries
Then they show their family ties
Parents give in after a few tries.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/25/2017 8:18:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Bawa - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/20/2017 4:39:00 PM
Nice poem Bawa.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/8/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging comments. I was wondering if anyone would read it !
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Date: 8/8/2017 6:40:00 PM
Bawa...your depth of familial understanding& compassion is evident in this lovely poem...jimbo
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