Paula Goldsmith Poet Haiku

Cardinals

bright red~reddish brown 
my feeder is your buffet~ 
eat and sing thank you 
 


Date Written: 8/17/2021   

5 Place   
 
Songbird haiku Contest Judged: 8/23/2021    
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin                                                                                   Cardinals                                                                                                              575

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Marikate Kingston October 21, 2021 at 9:27 PM We have lots of cardinals here in our yard. One that begins his morning at 5 :) It was always my aunt's favorite bird Painted 1 for a Xmas card. I love Haiku. Your sweet poem has motivated me to try and write one. Paula Goldsmith October 22, 2021 at 10:14 AM Thank You for reading and for writing. It is a honor to have a win. I am glad you like my "Cardinals." Give a Haiku a try. I find they take some extra time. Let me know when you have one up, I would love to read it. Have a great/blessed day.................

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2021 at 3:30 PM Oh I like this one a lot. ADORABLE Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2021 at 1:41 PM Thank You for reading and for writing. It is a honor to have a win. I am glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day.................

Sam Kauffman August 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM Yes they do eat and then sing a thank you. Your haiku just makes me :) with its truth and clear-eyed perspective. Congratulations on your win my friend! Thank you for sharing it with all of us. Blessings for your day. Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2021 at 1:40 PM Thank You for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have a win. I am glad I gave you a smile. I love to do that. Have a great/blessed day.................

Tania Kitchin August 23, 2021 at 5:33 AM Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku! Paula Goldsmith August 23, 2021 at 8:31 AM Thank You for reading, for writing and for your congratulations. It is a honor to have a win in your fun bird contest. I enjoyed writing this "Cardinals" write. Glad you like it. I love these birds. Have a great/blessed day.................

Michelle Faulkner August 22, 2021 at 6:48 PM A sweet ode to the sweet robin :) Paula Goldsmith August 23, 2021 at 8:26 AM Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like my haiku write. Have a great/blessed day.................

M. L. Kiser August 19, 2021 at 11:41 AM A very lighthearted Haiku, i enjoyed this. Paula Goldsmith August 21, 2021 at 11:50 AM Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you enjoyed this haiku one. Have a great/blessed day.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 18, 2021 at 4:27 PM Cardinals visit my backyard magnolia tree. I enjoy seeing them. A charming haiku. Blessings, Evelyn :) Paula Goldsmith August 21, 2021 at 11:48 AM Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this haiku write. We moved. Now I do not have any and I miss them. Have a great/blessed day.................

Mystic Rose Rose August 18, 2021 at 1:52 PM Ah, it must be nice to see, them eat. lovely :) Paula Goldsmith August 21, 2021 at 11:46 AM Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, I loved to watch them before we moved. Now I do not have any and I miss them. Have a great/blessed day.................

Regina Mcintosh August 18, 2021 at 1:46 PM I love Cardinals. They're NC state bird and I've always been a NC resident. God bless you always sweet lady. Love, Gina Paula Goldsmith August 21, 2021 at 11:45 AM Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this Cardinals write. I love this bird. You are lucky to have them. Have a great/blessed day.................

John Lawless August 18, 2021 at 6:18 AM We've got a mating pair visits our garden every year.... Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2021 at 9:31 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. You are so lucky. I had them before I moved. I miss them so much. Have a blessed day....................

Jan Allison August 18, 2021 at 12:34 AM I love that middle line, so descriptive!:-) hugs Jan xx Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2021 at 9:29 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I had them before I moved. Yes, my bird feeder is their buffet and they loved it. Have a blessed day....................

Delice Arleen Skelly August 17, 2021 at 10:32 PM Cardinal is not a bird familiar to our shores. Would love to see one in my garden. Poem lovely Paula...Delice Paula Goldsmith August 18, 2021 at 9:27 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. One bird is a bright red and one is a dark reddish brown. I had them before I moved. I miss them. I would feed and talk to them. They are a beautiful and a peaceful bird. Try looking them up on the web. Have a blessed day....................