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Cardinalis Cardinalis

It was not the robe flowing beanied kind; nor the ball batting St. Louis slugging variety. I saw the shrill- whistling flying mr. proud to be a bird red male looking for a palomino-ed colored female kind of cardinal come a calling not for me, the earth-bound tin-eared feather-free wingless woman martian-looking through a pair of Zeiss.
©Kathryn McLoughlin Collins June 21, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2013 3:06:00 PM
Kathy, I had to laugh with this one... I started it with a laugh and ended with another... and in between was just beautiful... Love, Terry
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Date: 7/8/2012 7:20:00 PM
Love this. I remember it from PFT. you are simply marvelous! (so hurry and do those haiku, Kathryn!)
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Date: 7/3/2012 10:44:00 AM
PLEASE write some more! I THINK I've reviewed 'em all, though I'm still lookin'!
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Date: 7/2/2012 2:19:00 PM
I can hear them calling early each morning. They have a distinctive "cheer cheer" sound. Good way to write about our winged friends.
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:39:00 AM
love this wonderful witty piece, Kathy
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Date: 6/23/2012 6:07:00 AM
Marvelous language and imagery! '...robe flowing beanied kind,' I LOVE IT! and as for '...earth-bound, tin-eared,feather-free wingless woman?' WOW! A home run, Kathy!! Love, Keith :)
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:42:00 AM
Nicely written Kathryn - sweet and lovely - like it, thank you - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/21/2012 8:10:00 AM
Lovely imagery here!! A sense of humor too.. :)
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