Cardinal Enjoys the Forest

Azure blue shadows add ultimate joyfulness to the forest 
Gently moving brook waiting for deer and raccoon
Subtle greens and turquoises enhance her landscape
A sense of mystery and meditation, a private, sacred place

Not one sound, not a single smell, not a bit of movement
As stillness surrounds the black trees, who wait for something
Anticipating beauty in the form of a wolf or fox 
Nothing wanders this way; the rocks wait soundlessly.

It is not yet break of day, the nocturnal creatures are asleep.
The raccoons are nestled in the tops of trees, arms around babies.
An unnatural silence surrounds the woods, embracing her.
Not a single footstep, a cough, or a snapped twig in this sanctuary.

The few creatures who are awake, are not noise makers.
Minnows, lady bugs, ants, beetles, moving stealthily, 
Enjoying the coolness that goes along with morning dew
A red cardinal flies in and perches on a branch, changing everything.

A bit of scarlet against these blues and greens 
Awaken the oaks and the elms, they begin to awaken.
The cardinal feels her power and begins to chirp and whistle.
Waking up the forest in the most delightful ways possible.

Written 11-23-2020
Contest: On Your Marks Naturally
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gaul Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 4:07 AM
Karen, a rich picture of forest imagery with the racoon in the leading role. Well penned. Congtatulations on your placement.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Thank you Greg. I appreciate your appreciation.
Blodgett Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 8:08 AM
What a beautiful place Caren. Love it. Lonna
Krutsinger Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 6:36 PM
Thank you Lonna
Poteet Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 10:50 AM
congratulations on your fine piece here. It is beautifully expressed. Kudos on your win too, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 7:39 PM
Thankyou so much
Kauffman Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Caren, sending you congratulations on your win! Your poem overflows with brilliant color, pictures - love the mother racoon with her arms around her babies in the treetop - the anticipation of dawn. You have captured the scene perfectly. So happy to see this on the winners list. Sending you blessings of the season!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 7:39 PM
Thank you very much; I actually saw that one day and it was amazing. A mama raccoon asleep in the crook of a tree with her arm around 4 of her babies!
Ward Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Aha! A win for a poem written expressly for my contest. Congratulations for your win, Caren.
Krutsinger Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 7:40 PM
thank you my friend; I appreciate your comment and your contest.
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