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You did this perfectly and told a message that many will relate to (on either side of the situation)

Congratulations on your poetry placing in Brian's "Upto Ten Lines" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

an excellent observation. you've made the point very well. nice write!

Yes, indeed - the final line sums it up perfectly. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )

Congrats BG on another amazing win with this unique expression in poetry luv...

Congrats Barbara on your win in Brian's contest.Enjoyed.

Well done Barbara. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest.

Good topic on which to write..Some of these are doing this to make money when they are not on hard times so I saw on TV...Congrats on your win..Sara

I love this because it's so true. it's a wonderful snapshot, yet sad commentary on life, on people who need help and those of us, myself included, who dismiss those people. very powerful. i love love love this!

a fix, a trick, on the first hot day this summer A bum trying to find some shade, in the corner of a shopping place I saw his face, with compassion, I went and bought some water, leaned down, witha couple cigars, "Hey, buddy, God loves you too..." I came back around and he had smashed the cigars and I bent down and lay my hand on him, you want your Journey here to be over, Just put Jesus in your heart with fierce fiery and walk on out of here. He loves you. He left the water. Your verse makes me think of instances, we all have ourcolors in life, I appreciate yours more than mine, and your verse touched and inspired me to share that this morning, hope you do not mind. Lucinda re: Journey