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Poem written for and submitted to “Forts and Castles Poetry Contest,” Craig Cornish, sponsor, October 11, 2025.

CARDBOARD FORTS AND SANDCASTLES

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we built them in closets with worn out bed sheets  
and couch cushions heavy as boulders.  

the flashlight’s beam cut through the dark, 
a knight's sword, our citadel against bedtime.  

the carpet was moat-water,  
broomsticks and mops our armored steeds.
  
We drew maps on pizza box lids—  
Here Be Dragons in red crayon,
Mom's vacuum sketched as a sea monster  
with fangs of dust.  

there were no stone towers, just laundry-basket turrets  
and battlements of stacked books where  
discarded milk crates became our thrones. 

we knew the magic: how a blanket draped just so  
could turn December drafts into mountain winds~ 

they stood until Monday, these cardboard kingdoms—  
until recycling bins swallowed the ramparts whole,  
leaving only carpet dents where dragons breathed.  

And us—we still smelt of marker ink and dust already 
scanning the garage for next Saturday's unconquered country.
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Poteet Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 5:21 PM
Brings back memories of my oldest grandson and the couch/chair cushions all over the living room in fort form. Next couch I bought had two recliners and no removable cushions...He'd hide behind it and use the whole couch as the fort. Thanks for the memories. Great piece, congrats.
Miller Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 8:56 AM
This is wonderful and bought back so many memories, thank you
Maverick Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 9:57 PM
A dreamscape Sara..And yet is not our Current adult world subject to a very similar end.?? Reality shouts to me from your lines.?
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:07 AM
appreciate your thought-provoking comments...I agree on the similar end.
Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 12:43 AM
Such beautiful and simple times.....
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:06 AM
you're right...they were :-)
Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 7:59 PM
So many delightful visual gems ~ totally charming (S2L1 cutS through)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:06 AM
thanks, Line!
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 6:52 PM
This is endearing, Sara. ...beautiful
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:06 AM
thank you, Paige. :-)
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