Cardboard Boats

The battle rages, tree branch swords
cardboard boats on Viking Fjords
victory within our grasp
mother calling “time for your nap”


7/24/2021

Flair and Fun Quatrain Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/28/2021 4:39:00 PM
this so deserves a win. Is it judged yet? Sure hope you win. (thanks for liking my take on whispers)
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Date: 7/26/2021 8:22:00 PM
Wow. Methinks you have really nailed the theme of this contest, John. Super! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/25/2021 2:50:00 AM
Love the ending, John. Best wishes in the contest. ~CM
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