Cardboard Boats

The battle rages, tree branch swords
cardboard boats on Viking Fjords
victory within our grasp
mother calling “time for your nap”


7/24/2021

Flair and Fun Quatrain Contest
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Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 4:39 PM
this so deserves a win. Is it judged yet? Sure hope you win. (thanks for liking my take on whispers)
Wolf Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:22 PM
Wow. Methinks you have really nailed the theme of this contest, John. Super! ~ Gershon
Messina Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Love the ending, John. Best wishes in the contest. ~CM
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