Card Tricks

It was a party like most, I guess
And not a “fun” one, I must confess
But our hostess I adored
And I just couldn’t say: “I’m bored”,

So, I milled around, and said “Hello”
And tried to fake a “party glow”.
Through my third glass of cabernet
I tried of something “cute” to say …

To those persons I’d never met
And find a place for me to set.
In my search for a seating place
I glimpsed an unsettling face

The man to which that face attached
To me appeared most mismatched
With the guests there milling ‘round
T’was from his presence that I frowned.

His forehead high, his hair was dark
His eyes in-set, his skin pock-marked
His cheekbones prominent in their place 
And sunken cheeks in his hollow face

His mouth was wide, his lips were thin
And he possessed a jutting chin
His jaw-line strong and not discrete
But that made his face complete.

From ‘cross the room this man I watched
My impression? “The man’s debauched”.
Then I thought: Absurd! ‘Tis the wine
Which makes me think the man Vulpine!

The hostess produced a deck of cards
For playing card tricks and canards  
And for tricks, she performed a few
She was skilled, accolades were due.

The cards then she handed to
The very man that I had viewed.
O’re the cards he quickly pawed
His card skills were great and awed

With manipulations lighting fast
Everyone watching was just aghast
And I’ll admit, I was too
Until at last the man withdrew.

I began to light a cigarette
Then realized I would regret
For filling this crowded room with smoke
A chastisement would be invoked

So … I walked out to the patio
To have my smoke … but didn’t know
The man with the hollow cheeks stood there
And held my eyes with his calloused stare.

Tho’ not a single word was said,
His thoughts were transmitted through my head:
“There inside while you watched
You thought me to be debauched”

“And I am, and as you shall see
I’ll verify that painfully”.
Then cards he held out in his hand
I knew I must do what he had planned.

“Pick a card, any card,
As you can see – none are barred”
I saw my hand as it stretched out
I picked a card mid-deck, about.

I touched the card - there was a singe
An imperceptible tiny twinge
Between my finger and my thumb
I began to be overcome

As I looked into that hollow face
A vision I wish I could erase
His transformation from manly form
Around my being began to swarm

His eyes sunk backward in his head
The whites of them turning red
With burning centers of yellow hue
‘Tis then I knew my doom was due.

I watched his evil face contorted 
By oozing running sores exhorted
Evil retched rotting worms
As back into his nose they squirmed

And in my assaulted mind the pain
Was already driving me quite insane
The last thing I heard – his yell:
“You’ve just met the Prince of Hell!”

And now tonight I’ve met you,
Let me show you card tricks I do
Don’t worry it isn’t hard:
“Pick a card … any card …”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/2/2015 10:53:00 PM
Superb write Jack that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Date: 8/2/2015 6:11:00 PM
Enjoyed the story. Drew me in from the beginning.
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Date: 8/2/2015 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win but I'll stick to chess
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Date: 8/2/2015 4:50:00 PM
wow what vivid descriptive imagery jack i was hooked from start to finish - love the twist at the end - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/2/2015 4:07:00 PM
WOW, Jack.... awesome win. SK
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Date: 9/28/2014 10:49:00 PM
This is a lengthy poem woven into a great story poem, Jack! I challenged myself to read it and I am glad that I did. I quite enjoyed it! Love and light! xxxx D.
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Date: 10/2/2014 12:14:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Dorian, they are most appreciated. I've read your poem about "Mr. Poe" and found it an entertaining delight - good work! Jack C
Date: 5/12/2014 4:57:00 PM
Wow, Jack! What a story you wove in verse. I was captivated by the presence of this man at the party and couldn't stop reading each line, repeating some of them. You remind me of two famous writers. One is Edgar Allen Poe and the other is Washington Irving. Your story gave me the same feeling I had when reading Sleepy Hollow. Truly awesome! Thank you for stopping by my work. You'll have fun on this site! Carolyn
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Date: 10/2/2014 12:18:00 PM
Hello, Carolyn! I'm just now replying to you comments made back in May! I have absolutely no idea how I could have missed your comments for so long. Please accept my apology for my tardy response. I've read so many of your submissions here on Poetry Soup, that I would be hard pressed to pick one as a favorite. You are truly a gifted poet and writer. Thank you again for your kind words. Jack C
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