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Carbon Dioxide Blues

He said I was oxygen That he couldn’t live without He said I was the ideal That he wanted for a wife He flattered and he praised me Made me feel like a princess No one else came even close His desires he’d thus confess He’d waited for me for years Desperate to be my man He did ask me more than once To please love him if I can And then I tumbled headlong Into this prince charming’s arms I pledged him eternal love I succumbed to his sweet charms Many years have passed and now We are both set to get old But at times my heart just mourns For a love that’s getting cold For though we still make music To a rhythm all our own That hungry look has just gone The passion that I have known “My love, you’re my oxygen, You’re the life that I inhale!” Tell me, though, my beloved Has that oxygen gone stale? Am I the carbon dioxide That you are quick to expel? Need a fresh O2 supply That enlivens every cell? My love, if I’m no longer The breath that gives you your life Remember I’m still that girl You desired for a wife! Eileen Manassian Ghali PS...Soupers, I often tease my husband about this oxygen thing. I guess it is inevitable that somewhere along the line...the mad frenzy of love mellows to a comfortable rhythm. Of course, love needs nurture! I read once that someone told a marriage counselor, "My husband and I are like a comfortable pair of old sneakers," to which she replied, "That's alright, as long as you remember, old sneakers need to dance every now and then!" :) Get the music going!

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Date: 1/15/2015 8:02:00 AM
You are Potassium for my heart and calcium for my bones/ You are the yeast for my bread and honey for my scones.Love Wonderaleen>>>Your friend Rajat.
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Date: 3/8/2013 9:08:00 AM
A heartfelt write indeed...can't wait until I find that special someone. I can only write about love at this point..lol I'm taking in the wisdom from this poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/8/2013 9:10:00 AM
Yes....hope you find that special someone soon! Remember to cherish her and to make her feel like a queen! :)
Date: 3/8/2013 6:33:00 AM
Excellent!!!! My wife and I can relate to this poem Good poem poet Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/8/2013 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, Sean...will do! Thanks for the tip! Glad you can relate....I believe that marriage is something that you need to be intentional about...You should read this book, "Making Love Last Forever," by Gary Smalley! Great advice! Tip of the day: It would help if you BOTH read it! :)
Date: 3/8/2013 6:32:00 AM
Very heart felt, I think you should let him read this one. It would be a good chance to go deeper and I think he will be moved by your words.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/8/2013 7:56:00 AM
OOOPS...typo. I meant...I told him about it last NIGHT!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/8/2013 7:55:00 AM
Richard....I told him about it last nice. He gave me a smile and went to watch TV...He isn't into poetry. I mean, I share every now and then how I'm doing, and he is happy for me, but...not interested enough to read. I've made my peace with it. Got no other choice. Thanks for the post.
Date: 3/8/2013 4:37:00 AM
I love this Eileen!...It took 10 years for my wife and I to really learn to love each other unconditionally...She was 3 months older and I always told her I could call her 'old lady' and 'my old lady' for a while...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/8/2013 7:52:00 AM
TIM!!!! I'm four months older than my husband...and I was teased no end...especially when I turned 25..."HA, you are a quarter of a century old!" :( My husband is a big tease! I take it in stride! Glad we have something in common! :)
Date: 3/7/2013 5:45:00 PM
Your poem is wonderful Eileen..I think people just have different levels of passion and yours tops the charts......:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/7/2013 8:59:00 PM
Hi, Donna. You are a smart lady! I'm overly passionate! :( Don't know if you've read the book about the five love languages...well, mine are touch and words of affirmation. Hubby's is acts of service! It helps when you both speak the same language...or at least, when you are aware of the differences....you work to show love in a way the person understands! :) Hugs!
Date: 3/7/2013 12:02:00 PM
Very true and very clever, just love this Eileen xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/7/2013 12:07:00 PM
Mandy...thank you for the post. I'm glad that you took the time to read. Sweet of you!
Date: 3/7/2013 12:01:00 PM
I love your P.S. comment. It is a great compliment to your poem. The love can also be expressed in the little things. A card hidden away until you find it, a flower on top of your pillow. a kiss on the back of the neck. When the fire goes out it's the tenderness that means so much. Enjoyed your poem.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/7/2013 12:06:00 PM
Jon, so good to get this post from you! Where have you been? Have you started writing again? Don't give up...you have a gift! Yes...tenderness does have its place....but passion must always be there! It's just that it isn't a consuming fire anymore, but a warm mellow glow that bursts into flame now and again! :) Good to hear from you!

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