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Am I the one you dream of, 
Am I the one you prayed silently for with closed eyes at your bed side,
Am I the one you magnificently created of her figment,  
Deeply rooted and knotted in that dark part of your past.
Do you think you can create, recreate those vivid but vague images of her carbon 
copy through me?

Am I the one you want to smile like her,
Caress, embrace and erase your deviant discrepancy.
Have you visualized the slaving, the hard work she put in?
It seems I am the one you want to prolong the epidemic of your rage

Am I the one you really care for 
Or am I just a coaster to absorb that water from your glass
Am I the one you pictured walking towards you on that  cool Sunday evening
In that small chapel on the side of that Hill.

Am I the one you will share and tell stories about,
The one who will inspire you to become greater than you.
Will I be the one you run to when all hell breaks lose?
Am I the one you place above all other.

Will I be the one to conceive and bear seed just to please you?
Seeds that resemblances you and in essences are you
Will I ever be that one? 
The one you have morphed within the cavity of your brain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 9:08 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 10:13 PM
shaniel rowe, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 2, 2016 at 12:38 AM
SHANIEL, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
Walker  Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Excellent Shaniel... Enjoyed... Verlena
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