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Car                       classic
                 roof opened
                  feeling the breeze
                  on a humid day
                 It is very cooling
                 on a sticky scorching day
                 enjoying the convertible
                 as we travel along the dirt road
                 to the beach where the antique show is

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Anisha Dutta Date: 3/20/2019 10:23:00 PM I always love ride with hood open. Enjoyed thr poem. Blessing Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/21/2019 10:07:00 AM Hello Anisha, it looks like we both like the same thing. Blessings to you my friend.

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/7/2019 9:23:00 AM Ahh!! Enjoyed riding along with you in your antique car. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/7/2019 10:26:00 AM Hello Sara, so pleased you enjoyed the ride. Your welcome. have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/6/2019 3:39:00 PM I really want a corvette!! Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/6/2019 4:44:00 PM Hello Andrea, you would not be happy wit a corvette. It is hared to get in and out of. Also it is very low to the ground.I would rather have a Mustang any time. Have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2019 6:14:00 PM I have had a few Mustang convertibles in my time. I loved them and hope to get one again. I sure enjoyed your etheree for car. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/6/2019 8:10:00 AM Hello Andrea, my husband use to hav a Corviet. Hard to get in and a hard to get out. Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Joseph May Date: 2/25/2019 7:19:00 AM Darlene, A lovely write and a breezy trip.. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/25/2019 11:53:00 AM Hello Joseph May, S o pleased you enjoyed the trip. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith Date: 2/23/2019 12:12:00 PM Spring will be here soon, good one Darlene... Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/23/2019 12:43:00 PM Hello Charlie, thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios Date: 2/23/2019 4:49:00 AM Darlene! What a great poem.I can feel riding in my old Chevy convertible with my hair bllowing in the wind. Happiness,Pamagiota Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/23/2019 7:18:00 AM Hello Panagiota, I have always loved antique cars, still do.My husband use to have an antique Chevy to. I love that car. We went to antique car shows every Wednesday. Have a nice day my friend.Thank you for the lovely comment.

James Marshall Goff Date: 2/22/2019 7:06:00 PM Darlene, thanks for stopping by my work! This little gem has a Japanese Haiku feel of simplicity, like Shiki (Noburu)...like it! jimbo Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/23/2019 12:48:00 PM Hello James Marshall Goff, your welcome. Oh...it has a feel like Haiku and a feel of Shiki! I was not aiming for that type of poem. I was trying for an Ethree. Oh well, I will try again. Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for telling me. have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison Date: 2/22/2019 1:44:00 PM Oh sounds like an awesome road trip to a classic car show, love the imagery I can almost feel the wind in my hair! !:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/23/2019 12:53:00 PM Hello Jan, travelling on the road in an antique car show was a lot of fun. I miss it so. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.