Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Etheree

Car

Car                       classic
                 roof opened
                  feeling the breeze
                  on a humid day
                 It is very cooling
                 on a sticky scorching day
                 enjoying the convertible
                 as we travel along the dirt road
                 to the beach where the antique show is

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Anisha Dutta March 20, 2019 at 10:23 PM I always love ride with hood open. Enjoyed thr poem. Blessing Darlene De Beaulieu March 21, 2019 at 10:07 AM Hello Anisha, it looks like we both like the same thing. Blessings to you my friend.

Sara Kendrick March 7, 2019 at 9:23 AM Ahh!! Enjoyed riding along with you in your antique car. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Darlene De Beaulieu March 7, 2019 at 10:26 AM Hello Sara, so pleased you enjoyed the ride. Your welcome. have a nice day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2019 at 3:39 PM I really want a corvette!! Darlene De Beaulieu March 6, 2019 at 4:44 PM Hello Andrea, you would not be happy wit a corvette. It is hared to get in and out of. Also it is very low to the ground.I would rather have a Mustang any time. Have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2019 at 6:14 PM I have had a few Mustang convertibles in my time. I loved them and hope to get one again. I sure enjoyed your etheree for car. Darlene De Beaulieu March 6, 2019 at 8:10 AM Hello Andrea, my husband use to hav a Corviet. Hard to get in and a hard to get out. Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Joseph May February 25, 2019 at 7:19 AM Darlene, A lovely write and a breezy trip.. Darlene De Beaulieu February 25, 2019 at 11:53 AM Hello Joseph May, S o pleased you enjoyed the trip. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Smith February 23, 2019 at 12:12 PM Spring will be here soon, good one Darlene... Darlene De Beaulieu February 23, 2019 at 12:43 PM Hello Charlie, thank you for your lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios February 23, 2019 at 4:49 AM Darlene! What a great poem.I can feel riding in my old Chevy convertible with my hair bllowing in the wind. Happiness,Pamagiota Darlene De Beaulieu February 23, 2019 at 7:18 AM Hello Panagiota, I have always loved antique cars, still do.My husband use to have an antique Chevy to. I love that car. We went to antique car shows every Wednesday. Have a nice day my friend.Thank you for the lovely comment.

James Marshall Goff February 22, 2019 at 7:06 PM Darlene, thanks for stopping by my work! This little gem has a Japanese Haiku feel of simplicity, like Shiki (Noburu)...like it! jimbo Darlene De Beaulieu February 23, 2019 at 12:48 PM Hello James Marshall Goff, your welcome. Oh...it has a feel like Haiku and a feel of Shiki! I was not aiming for that type of poem. I was trying for an Ethree. Oh well, I will try again. Have a nice day my friend. Thank you for telling me. have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison February 22, 2019 at 1:44 PM Oh sounds like an awesome road trip to a classic car show, love the imagery I can almost feel the wind in my hair! !:-) hugs Jan xx Darlene De Beaulieu February 23, 2019 at 12:53 PM Hello Jan, travelling on the road in an antique car show was a lot of fun. I miss it so. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.