Capturing Freedom
I tried to capture this freedom
To capture it within a thought
For a time it seemed to hover
but freedom wasn't what I got
It seems my thinking lacked feeling
True freedom I couldn't explain
My mind it became a prison
This freedom was locked in my brain
By the morning I lost my mind
I felt it slipping from my grasp
Freedom found it's true expression
When it was released from my past
It seem that freedom is simple
It doesn't care what others think
It can't be found in a bottle
It can't be poured out like a drink
Once you have tasted its flavour
There can be no going back
Open the door just a smidgen
Freedom will provide what you lack.
Inspired by Peter Duggan.
Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2017
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