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Capturing Freedom

I tried to capture this freedom To capture it within a thought For a time it seemed to hover but freedom wasn't what I got It seems my thinking lacked feeling True freedom I couldn't explain My mind it became a prison This freedom was locked in my brain By the morning I lost my mind I felt it slipping from my grasp Freedom found it's true expression When it was released from my past It seem that freedom is simple It doesn't care what others think It can't be found in a bottle It can't be poured out like a drink Once you have tasted its flavour There can be no going back Open the door just a smidgen Freedom will provide what you lack. Inspired by Peter Duggan.

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Date: 1/24/2017 9:46:00 PM
Another WoW! from me. Really great thought here. Freedom is the thing we all seek. The thing we all strive for but many never really find. Freedom is found within one's self. You can imprison the body but not the mind. If you manage to shackle the mind then you have imprisoned the person. Another really thought provoking piece Richard. Bravo. A 7 from me. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/22/2017 2:37:00 AM
:) Lovely, Richard...simply lovely. I'm sorry I've been gone so long. I'm struggling with time. New Semester starts tomorrow. I will be back soon. Hugs
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Date: 1/21/2017 7:49:00 PM
With thinking like that and losing your mind you will turn into me! STOP you dont want that! Seriously you have expressed the concept of freedom in a very enlightening way!
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Date: 1/17/2017 7:11:00 AM
This speaks to me in the best of ways. A seven and a fav!
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Date: 1/17/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thanks again Armand.
Date: 1/16/2017 2:47:00 PM
you gave freedom its real essence, rich... superb!..huggs
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Date: 1/16/2017 2:24:00 PM
- So true and well written, Richard - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2017 11:40:00 AM
You expressed this very well a big 7 from me Love Mom
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Date: 1/16/2017 9:52:00 AM
My friend, Richard, freedom is so elusive unless we let ourselves in the hands of the Lord! A well written poem with profound meaning! A seven!
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