Captured By the Creek

Like a drug of dependence, this will keep me coming back
out along the Sardine Creek, walking on a wombat track.
I should know every cranny and hurdle in the way,
But secrets of the bush keep arising every day.

I am captured by a log with its copper coloured skink,
a family of firetail finches flying down to take a drink,
the scent of wild boronia drifting down a mountainside,
a wallaby amongst some wiregrass, believing it can hide.

I am no more important than a leaf upon the ground,	
and no more influential than a feather that I found.
I do not have the power of the Admiral butterflies,
and feel I’m way too over sympathetic where death lies.

I am captured by the orange fungi, hiding from the light,
a flock of screeching mountain lories overhead in flight.
Maidenhair cascading, mingling with the waters flow,
and showers in the pollen where clematis creepers grow.

I am not to be the master, just one link that’s in the chain,
like the sand upon the creek bed, I merely am one grain.
Yes I am one single figure that will come and go with time,
where strength does mean survival; weakness the lethal crime.

I am captured by the creek and the bounty it provides,
the colour and its boldness or a sweet voice that it hides,
I do not have a vision for to progress or reshape…
Yes here is where I’m captured and I never will escape.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Williams Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 5:57 PM
Hello Lindsay, Very well written. Some terrific observations in your words that flow so beautifully. Also a lot of wisdom about life. And in the grand scale of things we are all quite insignificant. However, even with that in mind, it is good that we strive to leave our mark in some way. And you are leaving yours. Well done Lindsay. Kind regards------John
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March 21, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Hello John... thank you for your kind comment John. As you are well aware, there is so much to take in when you stroll through natural scrub, and if you are a writer about nature, the little things stick in your mind until you find a pen to write the picture. Catch you soon John - Lindsay
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February 10, 2015 at 6:58 PM
Magnificent imagery!.. I feel as tho I walked with you... Hugs, dear friend... Arlene
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February 11, 2015 at 9:37 PM
Hi there Arlene... thanks again for reading and putting up a comment. There is so much to observe along these creeks in the scrub and it feels good to write a picture of some of it. Catch you soon Arlene - Lindsay
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January 29, 2015 at 11:12 PM
Very inspiring and enjoyable poem. Thanks for all the lovely images! Carol
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February 2, 2015 at 5:49 PM
G'day Carol... Thanks for reading and writing a comment. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this poem and the images belong to the small creeks flowing in west gippsland. Thanks again Carol. Lindsay
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January 26, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Lindsay, absolutely loved this poem, it is real Aussie poetry, also reminds me of where I was raised in South West in the bush and on farms, which reminds me what part of Australia are you from, Peter and I are from the West, Perth. Take care my friend..........Vera............
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January 27, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Thank you Vera... Most of my nature poems are written about my surroundings in both West Gippsland and Sunraysia in the Mallee (Victoria). Thank you for commenting Vera. Regards - Lindsay
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January 16, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Lindsay this one is just beautiful and I love how you incorporate nature and describe it so well. AWESOME. love phyl
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January 16, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Thank you Phyllis... I must admit that I do like to take in the almost hidden aspects close to me in the bush. There is so much to see. Lindsay
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