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I watch you fade away Until you are seen no more When day breaks and night falls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 5/19/2016 2:27:00 PM
Tyesha Ehigiator, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/17/2010 10:25:00 PM
I miss reading your work, I wish you would come back the soup has changed in so many ways...Raul
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Date: 9/1/2009 11:37:00 PM
Great haiku, I sure miss your comments and your unique posts. Where have you been hiding? I pray for your return...Raul
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Date: 8/28/2009 1:25:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, dear tyesha. Lainie
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Date: 6/21/2009 9:59:00 AM
Very interesting haiku here, Tyesha ... the title is intriguing also .... thanks for your comments
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Date: 6/9/2009 3:16:00 PM
Very beautiful Tyesha. I love what is not said here also. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/9/2009 2:12:00 AM
hiya! dear would you be interested in buying and reading a poetry collection written by me.If yes please do go to page and click on the collection link.I assure you it would be worth your while. Shishir Gupta
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Date: 6/8/2009 8:36:00 PM
almost like an energy that dissipates with light-contrast, what a cool haiku! Tyesha, fav! can hang on it forever, and thanks! fun to see you comment on my work! James
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Date: 6/8/2009 7:09:00 PM
Amazing write! Thank you for your soft comment! - yes I am speaking of me, I thank you again for your kind wishes! Keep on posting for talent is dwelling in your heart! - jeremia
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Date: 6/8/2009 1:00:00 PM
The title had me..the first two lines also made me think...this is well done.
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