"captured"

I watch you fade away
Until you are seen no more
When day breaks and night falls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 19, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Tyesha Ehigiator, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Moreno Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 10:25 PM
I miss reading your work, I wish you would come back the soup has changed in so many ways...Raul
Moreno Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 11:37 PM
Great haiku, I sure miss your comments and your unique posts. Where have you been hiding? I pray for your return...Raul
George   Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 1:25 AM
Beautiful Haiku, dear tyesha. Lainie
Mason Avatar
June 21, 2009 at 9:59 AM
Very interesting haiku here, Tyesha ... the title is intriguing also .... thanks for your comments
Winter Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Very beautiful Tyesha. I love what is not said here also. Well done. Love, Shar
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June 9, 2009 at 2:12 AM
hiya! dear would you be interested in buying and reading a poetry collection written by me.If yes please do go to www.abook2read.com page and click on the collection link.I assure you it would be worth your while. Shishir Gupta
Goff Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 8:36 PM
almost like an energy that dissipates with light-contrast, what a cool haiku! Tyesha, fav! can hang on it forever, and thanks! fun to see you comment on my work! James
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June 8, 2009 at 7:09 PM
Amazing write! Thank you for your soft comment! - yes I am speaking of me, I thank you again for your kind wishes! Keep on posting for talent is dwelling in your heart! - jeremia
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June 8, 2009 at 1:00 PM
The title had me..the first two lines also made me think...this is well done.
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