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With your dad idling in a box stand for huge bucks. Over time, you're fled with mates, proving plucks. After all, swiftly, your kids start engaging in sport. Over the eager mass, they may trap your caring snort. The sensitive inner voice is voraciously unhappy. A bird in an enclosure inside a parent's bravery! It mused with sails when tackled with the ocean. It stood back from the nest in awe for heaven. It draped blaze in such a way to reach the moon. And strayed the long-appreciated rules of the boon, Also, hypothesize what our flawed eyes might follow. From that ugly lofty position of vehement sorrow! For the dirt's posterity, this is precisely madness. To confide in ocean's furls their home excess. We are thrust in the hardness of your wings. Anyhow, the fore divided signs of airy plings. If you're ripe to revere those who heaved you, Besides, all other bodies sailing by your view, And acclaim the person who conceives you from the void. To arise as an idiosyncratic being, yet not decoyed.
Written: February 04, 2022 Encourage Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 2/4/2022 7:13:00 PM
Just as a bird flies from its cage into the sky to conquer heights, children should be encouraged to venture into life from the safety of parental roof..... ! Great poem dear Lasaad !
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Date: 2/4/2022 3:12:00 PM
Once again, a great deal to digest is this well written poem, Lasaad. Good luck in the contest, Bill
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