Paloma P Poet Carpe Diem

Captivating Chapters

"Every day is a page to write a new story"

Each minuscule grain of sand
   running rampant through
     hourglass' prismatic time
  at hand, awaiting life's resolve 
   to seize a brand new adventure,
like the dickens' nimbly flair
  enthusiastically captivating chapters
      of a poetically inspired existence 
   amidst everyday's triumphantly 
             conquered reawakening 




Quote response contest - Nayda Ivette Negron

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Darren White December 24, 2016 at 11:15 PM Wanted to say: coming back with congratulations, only to realise I hadn't said anything about your poem yet :) How silly! Gah, but congratulations anyway!!! From the bottom of my heart too.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 24, 2016 at 10:06 PM Congratulations Paloma.

Chris Green December 12, 2016 at 6:44 AM Each day can become a "conquered reawakening" a new page leading to a brand new story. This was fantastic. Good luck in the contest Paloma.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 12, 2016 at 6:11 AM Yeah, I agree/Justin. I like his description of your style of writing: smart poetry. This poem falls under that category. Great line ... amidst everyday's triumphantly conquered reawakening. You got the gift of poetic gab for sure. No one has a pen that speaks like yours. You're becoming my favorite poetic tool ... you ratchet and torque up my creativity. Thanks a lot. Unique verbal stylings this poem has, Paloma. Cool poem. Love and peace to you.

Justin Bordner December 11, 2016 at 2:51 PM Every day has the poetic potential to teach us something new about ourselves. Your smart poetry reminds me of this Paloma...J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong December 10, 2016 at 12:39 PM I love this inspiring piece! I hope to see this at a top winner. A fave for me Paloma! ; ) 7 Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 3:31 PM Thanks Connie, I'm thrilled you did! :)

Daniel Turner December 10, 2016 at 9:13 AM A new adventure, every time one turns the glass upside down. They do make wonderful subjects for poetry. Now pinch me and wake me up, Paloma:) Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 11:18 AM Nah, it's Saturday, you can catch up on your beauty zzz's. :)

Probir Gupta December 10, 2016 at 8:33 AM Well written in modern style ... Nice ... Best wishes ... Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 9:01 AM Thanks very much Probir...

Doug Vinson December 10, 2016 at 8:15 AM Wow, Paloma, you must be in a good mood today. What am I to take away from this - that hope really does spring eternal? It's not even scorched-earth. Doug Vinson December 10, 2016 at 12:54 PM Seems to me that when you turn your considerable firehose of a mind on a subject, even if there is hot lava coming out of the nozzle, there's still some humor glinting back in there, somewhere. : ) Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 8:25 AM It's merely poetry for the contest, I'm actually quite grouchy today. haha :)

Heidi Sands December 10, 2016 at 7:59 AM Excellent Paloma! Good luck in the contest :) Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 8:23 AM Thanks so much Heidi! :)