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Captivating Chapters

"Every day is a page to write a new story" Each minuscule grain of sand running rampant through hourglass' prismatic time at hand, awaiting life's resolve to seize a brand new adventure, like the dickens' nimbly flair enthusiastically captivating chapters of a poetically inspired existence amidst everyday's triumphantly conquered reawakening Quote response contest - Nayda Ivette Negron

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Darren White

Date: 12/24/2016 11:15:00 PM

Wanted to say: coming back with congratulations, only to realise I hadn't said anything about your poem yet :) How silly! Gah, but congratulations anyway!!! From the bottom of my heart too.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/24/2016 10:06:00 PM

Congratulations Paloma.

Chris Green

Date: 12/12/2016 6:44:00 AM

Each day can become a "conquered reawakening" a new page leading to a brand new story. This was fantastic. Good luck in the contest Paloma.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/12/2016 6:11:00 AM

Yeah, I agree/Justin. I like his description of your style of writing: smart poetry. This poem falls under that category. Great line ... amidst everyday's triumphantly conquered reawakening. You got the gift of poetic gab for sure. No one has a pen that speaks like yours. You're becoming my favorite poetic tool ... you ratchet and torque up my creativity. Thanks a lot. Unique verbal stylings this poem has, Paloma. Cool poem. Love and peace to you.

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/11/2016 2:51:00 PM

Every day has the poetic potential to teach us something new about ourselves. Your smart poetry reminds me of this Paloma...J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/10/2016 12:39:00 PM

I love this inspiring piece! I hope to see this at a top winner. A fave for me Paloma! ; ) 7

Paloma P
Date: 12/10/2016 3:31:00 PM

Thanks Connie, I'm thrilled you did! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/10/2016 9:13:00 AM

A new adventure, every time one turns the glass upside down. They do make wonderful subjects for poetry. Now pinch me and wake me up, Paloma:)

Paloma P
Date: 12/10/2016 11:18:00 AM

Nah, it's Saturday, you can catch up on your beauty zzz's. :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/10/2016 8:33:00 AM

Well written in modern style ... Nice ... Best wishes ...

Paloma P
Date: 12/10/2016 9:01:00 AM

Thanks very much Probir...

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/10/2016 8:15:00 AM

Wow, Paloma, you must be in a good mood today. What am I to take away from this - that hope really does spring eternal? It's not even scorched-earth.

Doug Vinson
Date: 12/10/2016 12:54:00 PM

Seems to me that when you turn your considerable firehose of a mind on a subject, even if there is hot lava coming out of the nozzle, there's still some humor glinting back in there, somewhere. : )

Paloma P
Date: 12/10/2016 8:25:00 AM

It's merely poetry for the contest, I'm actually quite grouchy today. haha :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/10/2016 7:59:00 AM

Excellent Paloma! Good luck in the contest :)

Paloma P
Date: 12/10/2016 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi! :)