Captivating Beauty

Ribbon layers of peach, tangerine, yellow and violet colored streamers of varied dimensions overlap While bridging evening sky the last of the sun's rays ignite different hues overwhelming ones sense of sight As its impression is reflected off mirrored surface of the lake Snow crystals hug lakes shores stopping any water from escaping its banks In its background towering trees minus all leaves just sticks for limbs poke out the tip top a bit bushy from multitude of twigs Even their image is echoed off slick glass like water Sky softens as it kneels touching the horizon where they seem to merge together with a dark barrier of dirt All melts into others or reflected off watery mirror With snow bringing it all together Yet the sky gives false hope of warmths welcoming glow to this captivating panoramic backdrop
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September 23, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Your words create a serenity and a peacefulness that only nature cam provide. I always love a tangerine sky. : ) Really wonderfully written Brenda.
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September 22, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Beautiful imagery!! It was painted as if I was there along with you...there’s nothing like letting your mind free in a calm place outdoors next to a body of water.
Chiri Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 11:37 AM
I know right! Nature holds so much beauty!;) thank you!;)
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September 22, 2019 at 10:10 AM
This sounds like a a beautiful place. You gave us quite the perfect description to see in our minds.
Chiri Avatar
September 22, 2019 at 10:55 AM
Thank you so much James! You are far too kind!;) Someone once challenged me to be more descriptive so I hope I came across that way!;)
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September 21, 2019 at 3:06 PM
Captivating beauty indeed! Wowsa!
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September 21, 2019 at 3:08 PM
Lol thank you John!;)
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September 21, 2019 at 12:26 PM
pure beauty in this gem....glad you brought it back for us to enjoy... hugs :)
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September 21, 2019 at 3:04 PM
Thanks so much Sandy! I do appreciate your kind words!;)
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