Captivated By His Words

Captivated By His Words
By: E. C. Almonte (Apples&Eve)

A strong couple once molded cannot be separated. 
The world we live in is beautiful. 
It’s we who create these deceitful ways. 
The four layers of bright light beamed down depicted the gates of heaven,
As I hung my hair out the window of his white pickup truck.
 
The sun’s keen rays brightened to wake up as it did the morning before. 
Mother Nature at her finest with her nursery of floating palm trees. 
He filled with anger quickly like a train slightly derailing
As the sparks of the copper railings entered his eyes. 

His innocence stood out to me more than the obvious. 
I sat attentively eyes wide and ears engaged to his lips like a bride to her groom. 
He went on to say to survive this world, you’re better paired in two’s. 
His story telling kept my curiosity wild like a feline strolling on a dessert afternoon.




									September 17, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/28/2015 10:28:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2015 1:19:00 PM
- Hey Eve :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/27/2015 3:42:00 PM
Hi! Thanks for the sweet welcome! wow long time! so far so good. Everyone seems very supportive with a pleasant to speak with. I'm new with sharing my poems, so this is exciting for me lol. Thanks again for wishes!! Nice to meet you as well ;)
Date: 9/26/2015 9:35:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win:)Alexis
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/27/2015 3:39:00 PM
I appreciate it!!!!!! =)
Date: 9/26/2015 2:20:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning write Eve!
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/27/2015 3:38:00 PM
THANK YOU!! ;)
Date: 9/25/2015 10:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this piece. Congratulations on your Win! Hugs Eve
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/25/2015 2:56:00 PM
*hugs back* I appreciate it!!! THANKS! ;)
Date: 9/25/2015 7:17:00 AM
Grats on your win Eve
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/25/2015 2:56:00 PM
THANKS!! ;)
Date: 9/21/2015 5:46:00 PM
A promised vow that two souls knit. Is always best when never quit. You've shown enlightened understanding in your heavenly grace. Welcome to the soup. Peace. :)
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/23/2015 3:26:00 PM
I appreciate the words of encouragement!! Thanks for the welcome!!! ;)
Date: 9/19/2015 6:48:00 PM
Eve, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/21/2015 1:19:00 PM
Hello. THANKS for the warm welcome!! I look forward on getting more antiquated with poets and their poems!! ;) Thanks again!!
Date: 9/18/2015 11:01:00 AM
Eve, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/21/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Skat!! I'm new with sharing my poems, so this will be an exciting start for me. I appreciate the warm welcome!!!
Date: 9/18/2015 10:02:00 AM
Beautiful poem capturing the bonding and love of a couple.
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Eve Almonte
Date: 9/18/2015 10:48:00 AM
Thank you! Yes, that was exactly the theme of the poem. Glad you liked it. =)
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