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Captivate

We look outward, here upon earth Ego anchored, devoid of mirth Fleeting joy that’s mirrored by pain Bound head to foot by desire’s chain Caught in a web, our heart did weave Time’s now that we cease to so grieve Conscience showing us path correct That love aligned, we stand erect Before each act, let’s take a pause Discern if lower mind the cause Mindful eye, thus always aware Adroitly sidesteps ego snare In timeless time, heart becomes pure Resolve firm, each test we endure Our consciousness, witness presence Aligned with God’s omnipresence Attention posed in cessation Tranquil calm, our meditation Magnetic currents pervade form Invaded by benign bliss storm Captivated by a love mist We surrender; do not resist Ceasing to size, we vaporise In as ordained, God realise 13-January-2022 C Form - Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France {Two or more verses of 8 lines per verse and 8 syllables per line} Syllable counter used: HMS Rhymezone check PS Grammar check
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Alex Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 6:17 AM
"Attention posed in cessation" - you have many great concepts to convey. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Poet Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in the contest with your beautifully written poem.
Seeker Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Thanks Lasaad!
George Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 8:42 PM
Beautifully composed ! Congratulations on your great win !
Seeker Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 10:56 PM
Thank you, dear Valsa!
La France Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 2:49 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your First Place win in my C Forms - Couplet contest with your wonderful poem, I always admire your lines ~ Constance
Seeker Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Constance! Always delighted to participate in your innovative contests
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 3:50 AM
So well done. Shouldn't you mention that this was on captivate?
Seeker Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 3:59 AM
The title of the poem is ‘captivate’ and the concluding verse indicates we’re captivated by a bliss mist. Did I miss something?
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