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wish! wish! wish for the sun! there, once ... in port on Captiva, slumbering the bottlenoses sang me to every first blush ... tender, daily, they'd wake me gentle, silken backs, a-finned slipping and melting the mirror surface ... (as sunrise melts the moon) puffs blown (wish!) soft as a child's eyelash, blinking me to the dawn ... a mantra, golden, warm offered up to brightening air with their hopeful prayer for my day ... wish! wish! wish for the sun! wish for a magic morn! wish! wish! abundant, the sea! all wishes azure-borne! wish! wish! swim for the deep! wish for a bounty there! each break of day as soft and sure as the pink sky my dreams were taken for their aspects ... meanderings paid for exuberance, rare I, kid's heart ever tugging chose a top-side bunk in lieu of below ... (or a cozy forecastle) first, for the sake of the sextant and a night vista beyond sacred imaginings - stars, moon ... the light-flecked wash of the 'Way itself oft' to take the breath ... but then, solely, in regard of the dolphins their wondrous wake-ups weaving into my spirit haunting the day-long and my dreams ever since ... wish! wish! wish for the sun! wish for a magic morn! wish! wish! abundant, the sea! all wishes azure-borne! wish! wish! swim for the deep! wish for a bounty there! I will sail my last dusk sky with that hopeful song in my soul, and the memory of precious Captiva mornings ... carried to me by those magical spirits, my bottlenose brothers and sisters ever ebullient and ever bright ... wish! wish! wish for the sun! wish for a magic morn! wish! wish! abundant, the sea! all wishes azure-borne! wish! wish! swim for the deep! wish for a bounty there! wish fair winds, a gentle sea and a kiss on the dawning air! that joyous song - your buoyant spirit forever ... my heart. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Dolphins" Poetry Contest, Julie Leigh Rodeheaver, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 6th Place ~ in the "Premiere Contest Number 15" Poetry Contest, SKAT A, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 3/16/2018 11:04:00 PM
Interesting format...hope saying this in correct way. You never disappoint! Every aspect is right on...well deserved Congrats! bbn
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/16/2018 11:20:00 PM
Thank you SO much, Barbara, that's very kind of you - I'm so pleased you enjoyed my dolphin tribute ... this is such a wonderful memory for me, and as such was easy to write about, but I wanted to make it more unusual, and the sounds that they make when breathing always reminds me of the word "wish!", and in a musical way! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/4/2018 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.. the wonderful imagery made me feel every line...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:12:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Eve, thank you so very kindly! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 5:02:00 PM
Such a wonderful poetic tribute to one of nature's (and my) beautiful creatures, Greg. Beautifully written, and congrats on your top placement. Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:10:00 PM
I so greatly appreciate the kind comments, Sandra, thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 9:22:00 AM
Awesome poem, Gregory. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:09:00 PM
Very kind of you, Line, thank you! :-)
Date: 3/3/2018 9:20:00 AM
I knew THIS one would be a winner. Wow, top spot! Congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:09:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Andrea! :-) <3
Date: 3/3/2018 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations... and jubilations... The dolphin... one of natures... greatest creations... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ long... but the sea was calm... so enjoyed your poetry charm... Mick
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/7/2018 7:08:00 PM
Very kind of you, Mick - thank you so much! :-)
Date: 1/29/2018 10:42:00 PM
I love this one, Greg! Beautiful, engaging imagery, and you probably know by now the special place in my heart for nautical poems. I also enjoy how you varied the pace and tone of your piece for added effect - it worked! Congratulations on a truly strong piece and placement!! All good things to you, my friend!! :) Bartholomew
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2018 12:47:00 AM
What a very kind and heartfelt comment, Bartholomew, and one I do not take for granted. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my entry, and I, too, love all things nautical, (and celestial). Blessings to you, My Good Friend! :-)
Date: 1/29/2018 7:47:00 PM
Amazing imagery, Gregory. Congratulations on your placement on this short list of winners. Sandra :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2018 12:45:00 AM
Very kind of you, my friend, thank you so much for the wonderful comment! :-) <3
Date: 1/29/2018 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, Gregory! ...Fran
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2018 12:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Francis - blessings to you, Friend! :-)
Date: 1/29/2018 4:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Gregory. Love the imagery. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line, I'm glad you liked it, Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 1/29/2018 2:24:00 PM
Gregory R Barden,, Congratulations on your win. With Lots Of Love *SKAT*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/30/2018 12:44:00 AM
Thank you very much, SKAT - I greatly appreciate it! Honored and humbled to be on a list of such wonderful poets, and pleased you enjoyed my poem. :-)
Date: 1/22/2018 6:12:00 PM
This is so wonderful. Another one of yours I had not seen yet. When will this contest ever be judged, do you think? another soupie for you
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Date: 1/22/2018 7:50:00 PM
Very sweet of you, Friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it ... this was an actual experience of mine ... rather a "different" poem. Blessings and thanks, Andrea! :-) <3
Date: 12/28/2017 11:34:00 AM
Great last stanza... good luck in the contest Greg..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/30/2017 9:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend! :-)

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