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Nothing like watching a good "Pirates of the Caribbean" movie on a Sunday afternoon.

I was watching The television When I Noticed A clip Of Captain Jack Sparrow All alone On his ship He was guzzling His rum And continued To drink When his Black Pearl ship Had started To sink He slurred And he swaggered From all That he drank Then he said "I'm Captain Jack Sparrow I'll now Walk the plank" Hands tied And blind folded As he sank To the bottom He was rescued By a mermaid When she swam And she got him She left him On the shore Where his journey Had begun When he drank To his fate With his bottle Of rum

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Date: 4/23/2018 8:43:00 AM
Love it, Charles! So glad the mermaid rescued him and hopefully, Captain Jack Sparrow learned a valuable lesson and changed his life from drunk to sober. All the best to you. Keep 'em flowin'! :) ~ Artsie
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Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly
Date: 4/23/2018 10:01:00 AM
Yes, Captain Jack and sober is like an oxymoron. lol But even for Captain Jack we can hope. ;) Thank you. You too, have a pleasant day and a great week. :) ~ Artsie
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charles messina
Date: 4/23/2018 9:39:00 AM
Hello Artsie, so nice to see you again! Yes, hopefully he has..but he wouldn't be Captain Jack if he had gone sober..lol Wish you a nice day.....All the best, Charlie