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Capsizing

In throes of deepest admiration My heart cracking like lines in pavement, Overwhelmed to the point of capsizing As I behold my beloved, No recesses of firmament Not present in her gaze. My pinion pinched and unwieldy No longer can I sojourn To the celestial region So you saw fit To place in her lissome form All the beauty of the heavens. She in state of repose, Words always kind and sweet Never besmirch, belittle, or cause harm To this brittle soul of mine. I beseech you have mercy on me The third son of a third son Of a man with just one eye. Me I’ve got both, But it won’t be enough For my rods and cones To comprehend her majesty, Amidst sins not yet atoned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/9/2018 10:31:00 PM
Well done, Vaughan. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this creative verse.
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:46:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Vaughan, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Vaughan Wesley
Date: 6/4/2018 8:13:00 PM
Hey thanks a lot it was fun.
Date: 6/4/2018 11:12:00 AM
Wonderful write VW, third son of a third son, unique and intriguing write, congrats on a top placement!
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Vaughan Wesley
Date: 6/4/2018 11:22:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/30/2018 9:28:00 AM
Wow! Stellar read :) xomo!
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