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Canyon of Emotions

Depression is a canyon—deep, wide, and rugged.
It has a top; it has a bottom.
But there is a rocket that plummets to its depths,
With only a slow and arduous build to the top.

The canyon has an oasis,
But it is infested with arsenic.
A bright pink flower glows atop a cactus.
The glowing touch is beautiful,
But its needles are sharp—impaling, lingering.
Pain freezes time long after the touch is gone.

Sometimes, a visitor comes to the canyon
Not realizing the rocket ride they took,
Descending to the bottom.
Other times, a visitor falls
From their lofty perch—
Looking over and judging those inside.

Mirages of lifelines waver in the distance.
A ladder leans along the canyon wall,
But it does not begin to climb out of the hole—
It is only there to offer false hope.

Be careful around the edges.
They are more slippery than the imagination.
The edges shift, rotate,
Taunt and tease.
Be careful around the edges—
Because you never know
Exactly how deep the canyon is
Until you fall inside.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Baker Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Dramatic poetry, my friend. Depression alert with a canyon metaphor. Excellent poetry. Write On! Bill
Hawley Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 5:14 AM
It took me a day after I wrote this to think that I could have exchanged both of the words Emotions from the title and Depression for the word "sin." Glad you like this one.
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 4:58 AM
Yes, this is a very well composed poem which shows, defines, and lets the reader experience the turmoil that depression can bring. Depression is the pits for sure. Thanks for sharing this one with us, Miranda. Sara K..soupmail soon.
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 10:31 PM
It is wonderful to learn this came to you so suddenly out of the blue and be so clever and deep at the same time. Way to go, Miranda
Hawley Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 6:31 AM
I was riding shotgun with my husband doing Instacart orders when this poem came to me, so I did a voice to text as this poem built up in my head. Yes, it got the polishing touches after I got home and sat down on my computer. Thanks for the compliment!
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