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Canticle of Two Stars

Canticle of Two Stars I hear the two stars singing In daylight valleys of never ending tears And through deep deserts of rushing storms At midnight; Companions on my journey, Duets, In perfect harmony, Daystar at the dawn - A light unto my feet – a morning song - North Star for the midnight Standing watch in darkness So quietly humming in solitude; Celestial melodies Intertwined In radiant symphonies of light – A morning paean To rise up in daylight And a lullaby To guide my steps Into dreams Beneath broad wings Protection from discord - Fiery beacons over mountaintops Chanting life at dawn and dusk - The rhythm of two heartbeats Heard across the galaxies - A rhapsody. Yes, I hear the two stars singing.

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John Watt

Date: 3/24/2020 6:48:00 PM

Back to say congrats for your #1 on this beautiful canticle. Grace and peace ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/25/2020 1:09:00 AM

Thank you so very much John. Many blessings to you my friend!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 3/24/2020 5:13:00 PM

Congrats on your top win my friend! I have missed these contests! And seeing all your wins!;)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/24/2020 6:06:00 PM

Brenda, thank you so much. As usual, you have touched my heart with your kindness! Have missed you and your poetry. Hope you are back in the saddle and "rearin'" to go again. Blessings my friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/24/2020 4:11:00 PM

Congrats Sam on your #1 win-- a superb write.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/24/2020 6:08:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! This one demanded to be written. Was inspired by Chantelle's contest theme on the stars. Always a inspiring theme!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/24/2020 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win, Sam:-) Brilliant, as usual!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/24/2020 1:32:00 PM

Your message, as always, touches my heart, Edward. Thank you for your congratulations and for your continuing support - your encouragement!

David Drowley

Date: 3/24/2020 9:58:00 AM

'Sam, Congratulations on this winner! You wrote of two stars in four-star fashion. David'

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/24/2020 11:07:00 AM

Thank you David for your five star message and your congratulations! It is most appreciated. And, like I said, I loved your winner!

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/24/2020 9:37:00 AM

this is beautiful Sam...I am guessing it was inspired by the recent star contest, your muse was surely inspired... congratulations on your top win... hugs and blessings

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/24/2020 11:05:00 AM

Hi Sandra, you are correct. I think I missed Chantelle's deadline. Thank you for your congratulations. I am so glad your liked it. Hugs and blessings to you. Stay well my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2020 2:50:00 PM

Sam, this poem of yours is lovely and a winner to me, well done _Constance

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/23/2020 2:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Constance. I am touched, in a good way, by your message. I think I just missed Chantelle's contest but wanted to share this on the Soup anyway! Stay well! Blessings to you.

John Watt

Date: 3/22/2020 11:18:00 PM

You are the singing poet, Sam. Your poetic rhapsodies are always a blessing to read, especially when your words venture into the terra firma of music. The 24-hour duet calls to mind the 121st Psalm "the sun will not harm you by day, nor the moon by night. The Lord will keep you from all harm, he will watch over your life". Also Psalm 91 with the Lord providing refuge under his wings. "Celestial melodies / Intertwined / In radiant symphonies of light". Indeed. (Another fav for me). Blessings ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/23/2020 2:46:00 PM

Hi John, I guess the music does seep through into my poetry! Ps. 95 and Ps. 121 are two of my favorites and I am so glad they echo in this piece. Like Power of One, this jumped up demanding to be written. Thank you my friend!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/23/2020 1:38:00 AM

You are too good, my friend. You figured out my references! These two psalms are two of my favorites. Thank you, as always, for your positive feedback and encouragement! Many blessigs to you! Stay well.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/22/2020 5:43:00 PM

This is so beautiful Sam. Did you miss the deadline on entering this in Chantelle's contest? This would have rated high I am sure. I loved it! xxoo

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/23/2020 1:33:00 AM

Thank my friend! I think I did miss the deadline - finished it just as the last entries were submitted. But that being said, I am so glad you loved it. Even if it didn't make the contest at least I can still share it! Always love your visits. Aloha! Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2020 3:40:00 PM

this is beautiful, Sam. Thanks for visiting me today. You are so sweet.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/23/2020 1:35:00 AM

Hi Andrea. I am so glad you liked this one. I think I missed the contest deadline, but, as I said to Connie at least I can still share it. Have a wonderful week! Blessings my friend.