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Cantankerous

mushrooming loam 
amber and red daub the sludge 
with water and glaze. 
stirred by the whispering breeze
sharing their stealthy karma

written: February 18, 2022


A Brian Strand Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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William Kelii Kekaula February 18, 2022 at 1:35 PM Wondrously executed, Lasaad, your insights articulated your photo with hints of a satisfied expert my friend, Aloha~William!

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 18, 2022 at 12:00 PM Wow! Your poem with its exquisite imagery, and the beautiful picture, seem to be a perfect match. Very nice! Evelyn