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Can't we just start it all again

I can't leave you in you're pain
Can't we just start it all again?
I promise I'll be wise this time
I'll keep it in mind that you ain't mine
Because the most important thing for me is for you to shine
This time I won't say things i shouldn't have
This time i know that 'You & Me' i couldn't have
This time i will be a good kid
I won't start liking you, in my heart won't plant  the wrong seed
This time will make sure that our friendship will last forever
This time i will not act stupid but clever
Yeah i know , this time our conversations won't have that flavour 
But its ok , atleast I'll be able to see, hear and talk to you
Atleast i will be able to run and walk to you
Atleast i won't have to look around when i see you
Atleast my eyes won't be wet after you're gone
Atleast i could focus all along
Loosing you was my biggest fear
Now life have become blur and unclear
When I look around, you aint there
I remember I had promised that I'd Never leave
This time don't ask for that promise, i won't even give
This time I swear I will be a good kid
But i guess we can't change things like we want to
In this life, you by my side is all i need
Just Because I can't see it
Does it mean it isn't there? Your love
Leaving me broke in midway
Is it fair?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/9/2018 11:52:00 AM
Hello Ishwar, so nice to meet you. we all make mistakes at any age. Some can be fixed and some can not. have a nice day my friend.
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Ishwar Zore
Date: 12/9/2018 8:19:00 PM
THANKS for taking some time to share your insight. You too have a nice day friend. Hugs . Ishwar
Date: 11/14/2018 4:27:00 PM
We all learn from our mistakes and become better people, a new beginning, and a future that holds promise awaits if we take a different road...very well expressed Ishwar.
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Ishwar Zore
Date: 11/17/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you mam. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Date: 11/9/2018 3:17:00 AM
The raw pain in this poem reminds me of a child being left behind, a man or a woman being left, and the doubtful feelings we have when it happens. Very nicely done! Welcome to PoetrySoup, Ishwar.
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Ishwar Zore
Date: 11/9/2018 4:14:00 AM
Thanks alot mam. I've been writing from last two - three years now. This is the first time I've posted some of my work online. And I have never received such a thoughtful comment on my poem ever. Really thanks for that mam.