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Can'T Stand Those Loose Ends

It was two A. M., and I’d not slept.
I had grumbled and groaned, almost wept.
What was torturing me?
Then the truth I did see.
I yelled, “Whoopee” and from my bed leapt.

My old arthritic knees worked just fine;
to the kitchen I made a beeline.
There was one piece of cake,
which for my sweet tooth’s sake
I devoured. Then I slumbered till nine.


June 12, 2020
entered in Carolyn Devonshire's Sleepless Contest    placed 2nd
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Laurie Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 7:34 PM
G'day Janice … nicely written set of limericks with a sure fire remedy to boot - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 7:36 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 2:54 AM
I can relate with this so well. At nights, I lay awake and while thinking of something my stomach grumbles and I have cravings for cakes. Congratulations on your win Janice :)
Canerdy Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 9:11 AM
Aditi, thank you so much. You are very supportive. Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:03 PM
I just hate it when I get hungry at night but if I eat too early it happens all the time and I can’t sleep without getting something to eat. So I understand what you are saying in this poem and relate to it so well. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Canerdy Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:19 PM
THANK YOU so much, Connie. Janice
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Janice, I'm glad I'm not the only one who has to get up in the middle of the night to devour that goody in the fridge. Really enjoyed this! Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:42 PM
You earned your win, Janice. It was a very competitive contest and your entry was among the best.
Canerdy Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Carolyn, I am THRILLED! Thank you for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice
Makama Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work
Canerdy Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 5:29 PM
Thank you so much, Funom! Janice
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 8:00 PM
Ho, ho, ho! Does this ever resonate! ~ Sweet Tooth
Canerdy Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Yep! Thanks, Gershon. Janice
Bauer Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 2:14 PM
ha! adorable, janice! good luck in the contest...
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Leffanta Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Some do believe chocolate is better than sex for a good night's sleep - just ask Wendy! …..Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Thanks, Rico. Who's Wendy? Janice
Faulkner Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Sometimes that midnight snack is just what you need to drift into dreamland! Great entry for the contest, Janice-
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Thanks so much, Michelle. Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 7:12 AM
That urge haunts many of us..your poem feels so real because it is. Is that you in the photo, Janice?
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! No, not me; she's younger and better looking. Janice
Kannan Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 1:53 AM
Ha ha ... A funny write. Reads like a winner...
Canerdy Avatar
June 13, 2020 at 7:58 AM
Thanks so much, Supraja. Janice
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