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Can'T See My Spot

Can't see my spot, pretty sure it's still there Felt a stirring below when I spotted a lady fair Looked up at me Said, “didn't you see?” Motioned frantically, waving it poor self in the air!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/7/2017 7:58:00 AM
I was wondering what spot you meant! LOL!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2017 8:52:00 AM
Hmmm! Pretty sure you have one too!!! Mine talks dirty to me!!!
Date: 12/6/2017 8:43:00 AM
A bald spot poking through all that hair?//I thought you had plenty up there//Or maybe not//a different spot//Who knows what's in your lair! STIR ON DOUBLE OH SEVEN!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/6/2017 10:05:00 AM
More down there than up there though!!! DOUBLE TROUBLE!

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