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Can'T Fool Life

Wake up and smell the coffee Forget that stupid things you dreamed about Believe me, you ain't worthy It turned your life completely upside down Your fate is almost challenge And there is nobody who has your back You thought that life is balance But all what you got is a heart attack Chorus Hey fool You ain't cool Desiring for needed power There is Byronic hero inside of you Your life is going sour There's no plan, it's always out of the blue I could say a lot of words if I wanted to But you decided to cross swords and I'm willing to stop you

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/2/2017 11:25:00 AM

Alisa I like your poem.The fool is not cool. have a nice day my friend. Have a nice dy my friend.You will gain knowledge. Have a nice day my friend.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/19/2017 2:29:00 PM

"Hey fool You ain't cool" Say it like it is, Alisa. Enjoyed your poem...A good afternoon to you

James Swartz

Date: 9/10/2017 9:32:00 AM

Great Great Great stuff! The byronic hero (always been a favorite phrase of mine) part is genius Alisa. It flows and says so much i can and will re-read it many times.

Alisa Balaieva
Date: 9/11/2017 2:43:00 AM

Hi James, Thank you for nice words. I appreciate it. It's always important for me to hear critics, because I want to write better and better. I'm not native English-speaker, so writing poetry is my way of gaining knowledge.