Eve Roper Poet Footle

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Can'T Catch Me

Can't Catch Me

field Mouse
did rouse

house cat
fell flat

took chase
fast race

small space
broke vase

smirk tease
took cheese


10/21/2016

Poetry Contest : FIVE FABULOUS FUN FOOTLES 
 
 Sponsored by: JAN ALLISON

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Agnes Krampe October 30, 2016 at 2:33 PM I am rooting for the mouse :) Nicely done, congrats on your win. And I must say, the form suits the cat-mouse-race perfectly. Agnes Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:16 PM Thank you, Agnes, :) Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2016 at 1:14 PM - Kat and Mouse always fun :) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:17 PM Thank you, sweet lady, :) Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2016 at 12:59 PM Nice seeing your win.big congrats to you, Eve! Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:17 PM Thank you, young lady, :) Hugs Eve

Jan Allison October 30, 2016 at 12:55 PM Many congrats on your top spot Eve - I know from reading other poems you pronounce it as 'vasce' whereas we say it as varse:-) the pic was super with the poem:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:19 PM Woo- hoo... thank you so much,,, I am always having to check on spelling words because all of our countries have different meanings different pronunciations I have found out... :( hugs eve

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe October 27, 2016 at 2:29 AM Very funny Eve - i like this All the best in the contest Mark

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2016 at 6:11 PM GREAT set, Eve. I mean it. You hit a home run here!

John Lawless October 22, 2016 at 4:01 PM Ah the proverbial game of "cat and mouse" cute Jan, cute. Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:20 PM Thank you, John, :) Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian October 21, 2016 at 11:33 PM GOOD ONE! :) Love Tom and Jerry and your footles just bring their shenanigans to mind. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:20 PM Thank you, sweet lady, :) Hugs Eve

Alexis Y. October 21, 2016 at 11:06 PM LoI! Eve, the picture was funny. This is a good footle.It looks like a winner to me. I wish you luck in the " Five Fabulous Footles " contest:-) Alexis PS. I loved Tom and Jerry as a kid. I still do lol! Eve Roper October 30, 2016 at 8:20 PM Thank you, sweet lady, :) Hugs Eve