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Cant Be (2) Remix

His Eyes Opened Wide His Suprise Was Unable To Hide "Are You Sure" He Asked She Nodded, Her Emotions Still Masked His Eyes Lit Up, Still Nervous Though She Filled Them Like Wine Filling A Cup, Lifted To Bros He Fell Down To One Knee Infront Of Her Like A Dream And Pulled Out His Class Ring "I Wasnt Really Planning On Doing This Boo. But Will You Marry Me?" Her Mouth Opened, Fell Into An O He Didnt Know If That Was A No "I- I Dont Know Babe" The Words Poured Out Of Her Mouth In A Darker Shade He Brought His Quivering Lips To Hers With A Kiss Confused She Pulled Away From His Lips "No", Her Voice Broke "No", She Repeated Trying Not To Choke "Its Not Right. I Dont Want This Just Because They Say Its Right" She Whispered Into The Night

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Date: 6/23/2009 2:01:00 AM
WOW!Why'd she SAY NO=c UNFAIR!wait is he single?Let him Call me up=p Love It BOOO=D
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