Canopy

Forest umbrella,
Rays of light plummeting through;
Mossy foundation.

By: Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 09/11/2009 

*For Raul's Contest "Solace in Nature."

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/19/2011 1:11:00 AM

I like the image here... Nathan, this canopy is hard to find in the lower part of Texas... thanks for sharing,..p.d.

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/14/2009 10:45:00 AM

I like "forest umbrella". CONGRATS! for your honorable mention.

Date: 10/1/2009 12:38:00 PM

Nathan, in addition to my other comment I wanted to stop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 4:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Nathan. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/30/2009 11:58:00 PM

Nathan, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 9/22/2009 11:48:00 AM

Great Haiku Nathan, all the best in Raul's contest>>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2009 7:02:00 AM

Very nice haiku, Nate. Quite a vivid image! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/14/2009 8:20:00 AM

uplifting! ;) Light & Love

Date: 9/13/2009 12:14:00 PM

Creative use of imagery. You paint a picture with words in this haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/11/2009 6:46:00 PM

nature forming it's own umbrella,,,,,,,wow, it sure has a way of taking care of itself! good luck in the contest!

Sue Mason

Date: 9/11/2009 10:13:00 AM

Beautifully done, Nathan. Good luck in the contest ... we were on the same wave length with our "moss" ... smile ...

John Freeman

Date: 9/11/2009 7:48:00 AM

Hi Nathan, I noticed we are fellow Arkansans, as well as Soup members. I am from the Russellville area. Good luck on your Haiku! Sincerely John Moses

Krista Kurth

Date: 9/11/2009 7:36:00 AM

nice haiku! good luck in the contest. Krista