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Forest umbrella, Rays of light plummeting through; Mossy foundation. By: Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 09/11/2009 *For Raul's Contest "Solace in Nature."

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Date: 8/19/2011 1:11:00 AM
I like the image here... Nathan, this canopy is hard to find in the lower part of Texas... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 10/14/2009 10:45:00 AM
I like "forest umbrella". CONGRATS! for your honorable mention.
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:38:00 PM
Nathan, in addition to my other comment I wanted to stop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/1/2009 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Nathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 11:58:00 PM
Nathan, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 11:48:00 AM
Great Haiku Nathan, all the best in Raul's contest>>James
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:02:00 AM
Very nice haiku, Nate. Quite a vivid image! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/14/2009 8:20:00 AM
uplifting! ;) Light & Love
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Date: 9/13/2009 12:14:00 PM
Creative use of imagery. You paint a picture with words in this haiku. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:46:00 PM
nature forming it's own umbrella,,,,,,,wow, it sure has a way of taking care of itself! good luck in the contest!
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Date: 9/11/2009 10:13:00 AM
Beautifully done, Nathan. Good luck in the contest ... we were on the same wave length with our "moss" ... smile ...
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:48:00 AM
Hi Nathan, I noticed we are fellow Arkansans, as well as Soup members. I am from the Russellville area. Good luck on your Haiku! Sincerely John Moses
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:36:00 AM
nice haiku! good luck in the contest. Krista
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:33:00 AM
Perfect description of Raul's beautiful photograph! What a beauty!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/11/2009 3:16:00 AM
Nathan,..sounds like you have the experience,...great write Sir !!! I'll be looking out for that one. james
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:50:00 PM
Thanks for your support Nathan...Raul
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