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Canopy

canopy cascade
shedding its charm and beauty
with graceful drama



AP: 3rd place 2026

Submitted on February 24, 2021 for contest SPRING TRADITIONAL HAIKU sponsored by MALABIKA RAY CHOUDHURY  -  RANKED 2ND
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Stebbings Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 2:57 AM
Congratulations on your win, Line, it is always good to see the green canopy spreading out. // Barry
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 5:17 AM
yes for sure, nice to know spring is around the corner~
Agustin Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 10:35 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Thanks, Beata. Much appreciated ~
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 7:28 PM
Congratulations on your win ~ Mala
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Thanks, Mala ~
Sambourne Avatar
March 3, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Very fine indeed. A grand haiku for warming days. Best wishes, Brian
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Thank you very much, Brian ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Hello Lin, Spring is a beautiful season. Bringing everything back to life. Hugs Darlene.
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 10:31 AM
That's encouraging... have a lovely day, Darlene ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 26, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Hello Lin, we are having spring thaw. It is so good to see the brown grass. It does feel like Spring is on the way. Hugs Darlene
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Indeed it's lovely to know spring is on its way ~
Mcintosh Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 6:40 AM
Lovely. God bless you sweet friend
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thanks, Gina ~
Cunningham Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Perfect image Line. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Thanks, Tom ~
Devonshire Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 1:08 PM
What a beautiful image, Line. Excellent post for the spring haiku contest! Best wishes for a win. Hugs, Carolyn (soup mail)
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thanks, Carolyn. Good idea, I'll tweak it for 5-7-5 format.
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 12:51 PM
- Lovely haiku, Line :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ~
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