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Canoeing Through Time

gliding through its ripples breaking the stillness in harmony paddling with my ancestors serene other than a loon's call as witness gaging the span of mountains by trimesters a sunrise about to make its grand entrance closing my eyes as to trade furs feels intense ageless today there is no one keeping time river sun mountains clouds paddling paradigm AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on January 31, 2019 for contest MY PLACE MULTI-PART EASTER PRIZES sponsored by CAROLYN DEVONSHIRE on August 6, 2018 for contest AUGUST 2018 PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND and July 9, 2018 for contest PICTURE ME A SUMMER RISPETTO sponsored by BARRY STEBBINGS

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Robertina B.

Date: 7/22/2018 7:43:00 AM

Such beautiful creativity, Line.. Really captivated me.. Lovely rispetto!! Blessings Dear friend!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/22/2018 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Robertina, for your lovely visit and comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2018 6:20:00 PM

This poem is beautifully written! I love the feeling of having "harmony paddling with my ancestors". This should garner some lovely attention in the contest Line. : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/9/2018 10:06:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Connie. Most appreciated.