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Canoeing Through Time

gliding through its ripples breaking the stillness
in harmony paddling with my ancestors 
serene other than a loon's call as witness
gaging the span of mountains by trimesters
a sunrise about to make its grand entrance
closing my eyes as to trade furs feels intense
ageless today there is no one keeping time
river sun mountains clouds paddling paradigm



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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B. Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Such beautiful creativity, Line.. Really captivated me.. Lovely rispetto!! Blessings Dear friend!
Gauthier Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 9:05 AM
Thank you, Robertina, for your lovely visit and comment.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 6:20 PM
This poem is beautifully written! I love the feeling of having "harmony paddling with my ancestors". This should garner some lovely attention in the contest Line. : )
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 10:06 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Connie. Most appreciated.
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