Canoeing

It was cold on the river So he lit a fire to beat it A mistake he realised As he sunk For you can't have Your kayak and heat it.

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/3/2023 2:28:00 PM

so funny, terry! i enjoyed...

Terry Ireland
Date: 1/4/2023 4:05:00 AM

;-)

Constance La France

Date: 1/3/2023 1:40:00 PM

Terry, a delightful poem, made me smile, well done, Constance

Terry Ireland
Date: 1/5/2023 1:03:00 AM

Thanks Constance.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 1/3/2023 9:36:00 AM

So Clever !!!! You never cease to amaze me. Always something new. This is brilliant Terry.

Terry Ireland
Date: 1/3/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thanks Wen. This is a pub opener. Give folk something short and snappy and amusing to start with and they’ll listen to longer more serious stuff. We’ve never been booed off yet ;-)