Canoeing

Two people in a canoe
It is both their first time
One of them is nervous
The other is being calm

One seated in the back
The other in the front
Each one has a paddle
So the journey begins

The paddle goes in the water
Then the paddle comes out
One of them h]gets wet
From the wet paddle

Going into the water
Then coming out wet
One of them is very wet
Cooled off from the sun

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Date: 8/31/2019 4:55:00 PM
Look at you Darlene Mrs Woodsman canoeing You go girl Hope you had a Beer after Fantastic
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2019 4:18:00 PM
Hello Christopher Flaherty, It was my first time and I did enjoy it. It was nice to get wet and cooled off. No I did not have a beer that day.I had a cooler. Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 7/11/2019 2:15:00 AM
Canoeing sounds fun, Darlene! Perhaps I too ought to give it a try! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/11/2019 12:15:00 PM
Hello Paul, You have never doe it! That was my first time. I had fun.Have a nice day my friend. Regards Darlene.
Date: 7/5/2019 10:39:00 AM
I haven't been in a canoe ever, so not sure if i t would make me nervous - probably it would - a serene write Darlene, well penned, Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2019 12:41:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, I was in a canoe for the first time when my husband was alive. I was nervous yet I had fun. Blessing Darlene.
Date: 6/30/2019 11:58:00 AM
Smiles, remombering the first time with a girlfriens who was a canoe novice and somehow managed to capsize us. It gets better.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/30/2019 5:16:00 PM
Hello D.W. Rodgers,Oh how awful! If the canoe capsized it would have been my last time to do it. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 6/25/2019 5:32:00 PM
That's the way it goes; especially the first time rowing; great piece.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/26/2019 1:39:00 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser, when a person has never paddled a canoe,they do try very hard to get it right. On a humid day it is the best way to get cooled off. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.
Date: 6/23/2019 9:34:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed yourself, Nice write... James
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/24/2019 1:02:00 PM
Hello James, it is a lot of fun. If you ever get the chance to do it. I know you will enjoy it. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/21/2019 6:47:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful way to spend a summer day... Canoeing is something I have not done before, but your poem put me right in the middle of the fun! Very nice work Darlene!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2019 7:39:00 PM
Hello Kelly,it is fun,my husband and i did itin Owen Sound. It was my first time. I enjoyed it. Thank you for the lovely comment.Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 6/20/2019 7:30:00 PM
Lotsa fun!
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Date: 6/21/2019 10:47:00 AM
Hello Kim, yes it is lots of fun. I miss doing it. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 6/20/2019 6:39:00 PM
Very descriptive! Panagiota
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Date: 6/21/2019 10:49:00 AM
Hello Panagiota Romios, Thank you. Have a nice day my friend. Have you ever done it? Have a nice day my friend.
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