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Canoeing

Two people in a canoe It is both their first time One of them is nervous The other is being calm One seated in the back The other in the front Each one has a paddle So the journey begins The paddle goes in the water Then the paddle comes out One of them h]gets wet From the wet paddle Going into the water Then coming out wet One of them is very wet Cooled off from the sun

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/31/2019 4:55:00 PM

Look at you Darlene Mrs Woodsman canoeing You go girl Hope you had a Beer after Fantastic

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/1/2019 4:18:00 PM

Hello Christopher Flaherty, It was my first time and I did enjoy it. It was nice to get wet and cooled off. No I did not have a beer that day.I had a cooler. Thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice evening my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2019 2:15:00 AM

Canoeing sounds fun, Darlene! Perhaps I too ought to give it a try! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2019 12:15:00 PM

Hello Paul, You have never doe it! That was my first time. I had fun.Have a nice day my friend. Regards Darlene.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/5/2019 10:39:00 AM

I haven't been in a canoe ever, so not sure if i t would make me nervous - probably it would - a serene write Darlene, well penned, Hugs, and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/5/2019 12:41:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, I was in a canoe for the first time when my husband was alive. I was nervous yet I had fun. Blessing Darlene.

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 6/30/2019 11:58:00 AM

Smiles, remombering the first time with a girlfriens who was a canoe novice and somehow managed to capsize us. It gets better.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/30/2019 5:16:00 PM

Hello D.W. Rodgers,Oh how awful! If the canoe capsized it would have been my last time to do it. Have a nice evening my friend.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2019 5:32:00 PM

That's the way it goes; especially the first time rowing; great piece.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/26/2019 1:39:00 PM

Hello M.L. Kiser, when a person has never paddled a canoe,they do try very hard to get it right. On a humid day it is the best way to get cooled off. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 6/23/2019 9:34:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed yourself, Nice write... James

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/24/2019 1:02:00 PM

Hello James, it is a lot of fun. If you ever get the chance to do it. I know you will enjoy it. Have a nice day my friend.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/21/2019 6:47:00 PM

Sounds like a wonderful way to spend a summer day... Canoeing is something I have not done before, but your poem put me right in the middle of the fun! Very nice work Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2019 7:39:00 PM

Hello Kelly,it is fun,my husband and i did itin Owen Sound. It was my first time. I enjoyed it. Thank you for the lovely comment.Have a nice evening my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2019 7:30:00 PM

Lotsa fun!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2019 10:47:00 AM

Hello Kim, yes it is lots of fun. I miss doing it. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/20/2019 6:39:00 PM

Very descriptive! Panagiota

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/21/2019 10:49:00 AM

Hello Panagiota Romios, Thank you. Have a nice day my friend. Have you ever done it? Have a nice day my friend.