Canoe

we put the canoe in
the river, like glass
sun high and hot
a perfect Midwest day

push off, catching our rhythm
harmonizing the oars
smooth teamwork
not our first time

we laugh and talk
just kicking back
reconnecting, remembering
it’s been a long time

we know what’s ahead
white water and rocks
and our favorite part,
the drop from the falls

we work as a team
maneuvering together
expert synchronicity 
through the treacherous water

this perfect day
the thrill of the danger
this time we share
a new memory

back at the shore
we load the canoe
you look at me and smile
an amazing afternoon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 9:01 AM
Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading J B. Thank you for sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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August 22, 2009 at 7:10 PM
What a great time that must have been.Thrills with a best pal. Barbara
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