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Canned Heat

dimensions align
need to apply the hand brake
way out of order
populace without borders …
used the virtue of vision.

© Harry J Horsman 2016

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Scott Thirtyseven

July 11, 2017 at 9:24 AM

If we only had such insight. Nice words, and thanks for the visit.

Seosamh De Burca

September 26, 2016 at 8:18 PM

Nicely penned truths

Viv Wigley

August 2, 2016 at 7:11 PM

Indeed, Harry, where on earth are we going? Fine write, enjoyed. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus

August 2, 2016 at 3:02 PM

Lack of vision has contributed to present age world problems; perhaps it would be wise to start afresh!! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

August 2, 2016 at 4:00 AM

A wise look at our present world with all its warts! Good tanka Harry! 7 ; )

Ravi Sathasivam

August 1, 2016 at 3:51 AM

Excellent write and deep tanka. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Daniel Turner

July 31, 2016 at 7:55 PM

Yes sir, this old world has really gotten into a hurry. I agree, time to apply the brakes. If only the people we elect and pay, had your vision! Great write Harry!