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Candy Tasting Love

                                                            Two
                                                           bodies
                                                         trembling
                                                     in the darkness
                             as love rains down and covers our drained lips...
                                 In a shower of sweetness my hands reach
                                                     inside the walls
                                                          of candy
                                                           tasting
                                                             love.
                                                    

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/4/2012 10:29:00 AM
This is hot! It's been awhile since I came back to p.s., I always love readind your latest. Thanx for sharing!
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Date: 10/27/2012 9:13:00 AM
Awww... i have no words spoken on this poem, Michael. :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 10:33:00 AM
Nothing is sweeter than true love !!!
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Date: 10/23/2012 6:01:00 PM
Aweee,, how sweet is this tetractys, aweee...one can taste the rainbow of skittles from this rain.... love this one... xox....pd
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Date: 10/23/2012 4:26:00 PM
that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Erich
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Date: 10/22/2012 10:54:00 PM
Beautiully brilliant! The shape is perfect as well..J
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:41:00 AM
wow, Michael, guess i've been missing out.. brilliant poem..
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Date: 10/19/2012 1:35:00 AM
A 10 RATING MICHAEL LUV .. PASSION SOARS SO TASTY .. YUMMY CANDY DELIGHT .. RON IS SALVATING READING THIS POEM WITH ME AT 3 A.M. AM IMAGINING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT .. OOOOHHHH... AN EXPLOSIVE EMOTION THAT SENDS LUV CRASHING THROUGH THE ROOF .. ONE OF YOUR BEST .. IF THAT IS POSSIBLE WHEN I ADORE THEM ALL .. JG IN VA VA VA VOOM MODE ..
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:51:00 PM
Wow! So sweet and awesome poem my dear Michael. I love it! I also love the form which is not yet familiar with me. Million thanks to you for sharing and your wonderful congratulatory comments. Have a nice day always! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/18/2012 4:31:00 PM
Hi Michael; You must be thinking of sweet things today. Good write. Have a great day. Lucilla
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:37:00 PM
SWEET poem. You can't lose with a title like this one, my friend. Good seeing a new post from you today!
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:24:00 PM
Yes! The absolute zenith of sweetness and love. Good stuff, Mike. Love, daver
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Date: 10/18/2012 1:42:00 PM
An amazing poem -beautifully penned. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem Love, Michael.
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Date: 10/17/2012 11:59:00 PM
Candy+Love=A passion that burns. Yummy. Love your double Tetractys. Very nice Michael!
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Date: 10/17/2012 7:28:00 PM
much passion in this piece....great write! hugs
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Date: 10/17/2012 3:34:00 PM
This is a special piece my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon! Michael you have brightened my mood for some candy right now...yumm, I'm having it now as we speak! This is a very delightful piece, I loved it immensely! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/17/2012 3:30:00 PM
Love that taste ..... Mmmmm. ..... or candy that is love ..... Whatever .... Love is Love - Candy is candy .... lol ... Sending you a whole bag of Candy and Love!! - Well written ! - Have a peaceful evening. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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