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Candy Tasting Love

Two
                                                           bodies
                                                         trembling
                                                     in the darkness
                             as love rains down and covers our drained lips...
                                 In a shower of sweetness my hands reach
                                                     inside the walls
                                                          of candy
                                                           tasting
                                                             love.

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2012

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Tara Jennings Date: 11/4/2012 10:29:00 AM This is hot! It's been awhile since I came back to p.s., I always love readind your latest. Thanx for sharing! Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 10/27/2012 9:13:00 AM Awww... i have no words spoken on this poem, Michael. :) Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 10/25/2012 10:33:00 AM Nothing is sweeter than true love !!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/23/2012 6:01:00 PM Aweee,, how sweet is this tetractys, aweee...one can taste the rainbow of skittles from this rain.... love this one... xox....pd Login to Reply

Erich Goller Date: 10/23/2012 4:26:00 PM that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Erich Login to Reply

Juniper Lock Date: 10/22/2012 10:54:00 PM Beautiully brilliant! The shape is perfect as well..J Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 10/21/2012 4:41:00 AM wow, Michael, guess i've been missing out.. brilliant poem.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/19/2012 1:35:00 AM A 10 RATING MICHAEL LUV .. PASSION SOARS SO TASTY .. YUMMY CANDY DELIGHT .. RON IS SALVATING READING THIS POEM WITH ME AT 3 A.M. AM IMAGINING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT .. OOOOHHHH... AN EXPLOSIVE EMOTION THAT SENDS LUV CRASHING THROUGH THE ROOF .. ONE OF YOUR BEST .. IF THAT IS POSSIBLE WHEN I ADORE THEM ALL .. JG IN VA VA VA VOOM MODE .. Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 10/18/2012 8:51:00 PM Wow! So sweet and awesome poem my dear Michael. I love it! I also love the form which is not yet familiar with me. Million thanks to you for sharing and your wonderful congratulatory comments. Have a nice day always! hugs:) Leonora Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/18/2012 4:31:00 PM Hi Michael; You must be thinking of sweet things today. Good write. Have a great day. Lucilla Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2012 2:37:00 PM SWEET poem. You can't lose with a title like this one, my friend. Good seeing a new post from you today! Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 10/18/2012 2:24:00 PM Yes! The absolute zenith of sweetness and love. Good stuff, Mike. Love, daver Login to Reply

Farida Akhtar Date: 10/18/2012 1:42:00 PM An amazing poem -beautifully penned. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem Love, Michael. Login to Reply

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/17/2012 11:59:00 PM Candy+Love=A passion that burns. Yummy. Love your double Tetractys. Very nice Michael! Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 10/17/2012 7:28:00 PM much passion in this piece....great write! hugs Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 10/17/2012 3:34:00 PM This is a special piece my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon! Michael you have brightened my mood for some candy right now...yumm, I'm having it now as we speak! This is a very delightful piece, I loved it immensely! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/17/2012 3:30:00 PM Love that taste ..... Mmmmm. ..... or candy that is love ..... Whatever .... Love is Love - Candy is candy .... lol ... Sending you a whole bag of Candy and Love!! - Well written ! - Have a peaceful evening. - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply