Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Candy Tasting Love

Two
                                                           bodies
                                                         trembling
                                                     in the darkness
                             as love rains down and covers our drained lips...
                                 In a shower of sweetness my hands reach
                                                     inside the walls
                                                          of candy
                                                           tasting
                                                             love.

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Tara Jennings November 4, 2012 at 10:29 AM This is hot! It's been awhile since I came back to p.s., I always love readind your latest. Thanx for sharing!

Dinda Minardi October 27, 2012 at 9:13 AM Awww... i have no words spoken on this poem, Michael. :)

Debra Squyres October 25, 2012 at 10:33 AM Nothing is sweeter than true love !!!

Poet Destroyer A October 23, 2012 at 6:01 PM Aweee,, how sweet is this tetractys, aweee...one can taste the rainbow of skittles from this rain.... love this one... xox....pd

Erich Goller October 23, 2012 at 4:26 PM that's a beautiful and romantic expressed poem. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Erich

Juniper Lock October 22, 2012 at 10:54 PM Beautiully brilliant! The shape is perfect as well..J

Harry Horsman October 21, 2012 at 4:41 AM wow, Michael, guess i've been missing out.. brilliant poem..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 19, 2012 at 1:35 AM A 10 RATING MICHAEL LUV .. PASSION SOARS SO TASTY .. YUMMY CANDY DELIGHT .. RON IS SALVATING READING THIS POEM WITH ME AT 3 A.M. AM IMAGINING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT .. OOOOHHHH... AN EXPLOSIVE EMOTION THAT SENDS LUV CRASHING THROUGH THE ROOF .. ONE OF YOUR BEST .. IF THAT IS POSSIBLE WHEN I ADORE THEM ALL .. JG IN VA VA VA VOOM MODE ..

Len Gasun October 18, 2012 at 8:51 PM Wow! So sweet and awesome poem my dear Michael. I love it! I also love the form which is not yet familiar with me. Million thanks to you for sharing and your wonderful congratulatory comments. Have a nice day always! hugs:) Leonora

Lucilla Carrillo October 18, 2012 at 4:31 PM Hi Michael; You must be thinking of sweet things today. Good write. Have a great day. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2012 at 2:37 PM SWEET poem. You can't lose with a title like this one, my friend. Good seeing a new post from you today!

Daver Austin October 18, 2012 at 2:24 PM Yes! The absolute zenith of sweetness and love. Good stuff, Mike. Love, daver

Farida Akhtar October 18, 2012 at 1:42 PM An amazing poem -beautifully penned. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem Love, Michael.

Vicky Tsiluma October 17, 2012 at 11:59 PM Candy+Love=A passion that burns. Yummy. Love your double Tetractys. Very nice Michael!

Sandra Adams October 17, 2012 at 7:28 PM much passion in this piece....great write! hugs

Russell Sivey October 17, 2012 at 3:34 PM This is a special piece my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this afternoon! Michael you have brightened my mood for some candy right now...yumm, I'm having it now as we speak! This is a very delightful piece, I loved it immensely! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2012 at 3:30 PM Love that taste ..... Mmmmm. ..... or candy that is love ..... Whatever .... Love is Love - Candy is candy .... lol ... Sending you a whole bag of Candy and Love!! - Well written ! - Have a peaceful evening. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)