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Candy Roses

Imagine red... A bed, of candy roses Deeper still Into a thicket of thorns Further, crimson In a sea of lipstick kisses Or adorned... By a nest of word stung hornets All relies on the side she wakes One slight, midnight miscalculation Sets my day off and into dire straits

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/20/2011 2:50:00 PM
go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet
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Michael Smith
Date: 11/22/2011 7:04:00 AM
He's okay.
Date: 11/20/2011 10:46:00 AM
Love your word combinations, Excellent lyrical flow. Kim
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Michael Smith
Date: 11/20/2011 11:14:00 AM
Thank you also, poet sister.

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