Candy Crush

It’s Halloween and I've gorged again
Eating as much as several men
Sickened last year, didn't learn then
After I start I can’t say when

Now what’s left is scattered about
Stomach’s gone from thin to stout
Will take months to work this out
I’ll regret it tomorrow without a doubt

Candy corn, bars and lollipops
Tasted so good I couldn't stop
Ate so much my belly might pop
Exhausted on the couch I flop

I have to admit with some dismay
That Haloween’s still a month away
Adding shame to this display
I have to buy more later today

(Everything Halloween Free Poetry Contest 10/9/13)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/10/2013 5:50:00 AM
- A very good poem for Halloween, Eric!! - Luck in contest! - Happy B-day 07.10.2013!! - Better late than never! - Hope you had a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Eric Niehoff
Date: 10/10/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thank you! Yes I did.
Date: 10/9/2013 1:17:00 PM
So darned cute! love it..I thought you were going to write about that game that everyone is playing on their phones..glad it was about good old candy! BG
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Eric Niehoff
Date: 10/9/2013 2:22:00 PM
Thanks! I thought it was a clever title.
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