Candy Canes

candy canes....

      striped treat offered
   
          by smiling store Santa
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pettit Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 9:29 PM
There are people other than Santa offering candy canes, but they want donations in return for them. Have you ever been offered a candy cane by the Hare Krishna? Good senryu here.
Fraser Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Ooo I remember being taken to see Santa and being given Candy of various shapes and sizes, mm McYummy. Good luck in the contest Francine >> James :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Francine, not sure which of your many entries yet is in my contest. I was happy to see how you got into the Christmas spirit with your cute descriptions of Christmas. How are you? Luv, Andrea
K. Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 11:28 PM
Can I have one too?? Heehee-- this is cute! :) you sure are on a roll with your senryu, Francine enjoy reading this too :)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 4:48 PM
Oh how cute Francine .. wonderful entry..good luck in Andrea's newest contest.. happy weekend my friend..with luv..
Mehta Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:10 PM
Nice and delightful write on candy Canes, good luck, Francine
Devonshire Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 7:59 AM
Enjoyed your senryu, Francine. Made me smile and brought back memories of visits to Santa. Love and blessings for the holidays, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 4:11 AM
Same here, a child which isn't a far step for me lol.... enjoyed your work my dear on this rainy friday morning here in NY
Onclaud Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 11:15 PM
i feel like a kid again, francine... so charmingly written! warmest, nette
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