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Self standing, solus candle, ushering baptism prayer gifting loved ones sacred life, a promise to always be there. | | guide deceased on their journey, witness teary eyes, turn blurry watch over eulogy speech, offering authentic peace vibrant, fiery complexion wavering hue protection, assisting ghost invitations observe vital declarations, seal high status documents letters, scrolls, for the president crimson, custom made stamps back when candlesticks lit lamps, religion exchange light for money ~ honour souls, lost down on one knee centrepieces chaperone romance, Capturing a tender glance scented aromatherapy meditation, calm, serenity comforting memorial shrines befriends a glass of blush wine, sheen lustre uplifts sorrow ~ hope for a brighter tomorrow.

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Date: 10/2/2021 6:20:00 AM
Beautiful I can see the light.
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Date: 3/28/2021 3:35:00 PM
You did a wonderful job with this concrete poem, Joanna! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 3/29/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, I'm definitely going to try this form again! have a lovely day.
Date: 2/2/2021 12:51:00 PM
There is something very soothing about a flickering candle, and flickers at baptism, marriage, death and of course romance. Love the creative layout Joanna. Tom
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Joanna Feltham
Date: 2/2/2021 1:05:00 PM
Thank you. It was my first attempt writing in concrete form, so I kept it simple to start with, I may try it again soon. :-)

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