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Candles On The Beach Watch the morning sun go down holding hands while out on walks. Words unspoken heard by hearts waves gently kissing rocks. A distant childs laughter rings a ships whistle fills the air. A stolen kiss upon a cheek hands gently touching hair. A window, or so it would seem of opportunity. Lovers hidden on the shore no one else can see. Turning quickly in the night now facing one another. Hear the turning of the tide? A friend becomes a lover. Falling softly in the sand as passion fills their eyes. Touching one another still both touched by nighttime skies. Seagulls crying from the clouds their echoes from above. As they both find the sweet release of lovers deep in love. So much of love left yet to learn so much for life to teach. As two lovers passion burns like two candles on the beach. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/15/2015 6:25:00 PM
It says "The Best New Poets Hot!" You're not hot! You're on FIRE!
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Date: 4/22/2015 3:26:00 AM
- What a beautiful and romantic poems, Edwin - Congratulations! - Well deserved p.o.t.d. ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/22/2015 6:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne. It's truly an honor. Ed
Date: 4/22/2015 12:59:00 AM
Thank you, you have descriptively place me in one of my favorite places in the world, jill
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/22/2015 6:39:00 AM
Then my mission was accomplished :) Thank you Jill. Ed
Date: 4/21/2015 8:41:00 PM
A beautiful, romantic write, Edwin. I enjoyed reading it tonight! Congrats on TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 9:09:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda very much. It's been a great day. :) God bless!
Date: 4/21/2015 6:07:00 PM
Interesting melodrama.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 9:12:00 PM
Not exactly what I would consider positive reinforcement but thank you for taking the time to comment. God bless Marilyn. Have a great week. :)
Date: 4/21/2015 6:01:00 PM
is it any wonder it is the poem of the day? Congrats, beautiful. Loved it from beginning to the end.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thank you Mary I'm excited!! and honored! God bless.
Date: 4/21/2015 4:11:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem today -- much love to learn indeed. Congrats.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thank you very much David. Blessings! Ed
Date: 4/21/2015 2:29:00 PM
Oh Edwin I am delighted for you that this lovely poem has been honoured with Poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Jan it really is quite an honor to me.
Date: 4/21/2015 11:56:00 AM
beautiful poem
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 12:19:00 PM
Thank you Corenne. God bless. Ed
Date: 4/21/2015 10:36:00 AM
Lovely images sweet and so much soft lines.. :)!!! COngrats on being chosen as poem of the day.. :)!//olive eloisa
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 10:45:00 AM
Thanks so much Olive!! It is such an honor and one I did not expect. God bless! Ed
Date: 4/21/2015 10:26:00 AM
Hey Edwin, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD!! This is a soft and lovely piece filled with wonderful imagery and warm love. Beautifully written and expressed. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Neva! I am very honored by being selected and overwhelmed by all of the encouragement. Blessings to you as well. :) Ed
Date: 4/21/2015 8:27:00 AM
Love the title and how they are the last words of this soft romantic write. This speaks with a smooth romantic voice. A pleasure to read. Congratulations on your work being chosen poem of the day. A great choice!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Maurice!! I cannot yet begin to say how honored and thrilled I am at this news myself. And dare I say flattered even? Even I never knew I had it in me. God bless my friend and thanks again! Ed
Date: 4/21/2015 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem Of the Day. Good write a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 8:23:00 AM
Eve!!! Your message to me was the first I knew of this. What great news and what an honor. Thank you. Hugs.
Date: 4/21/2015 4:01:00 AM
Congrats Edwin on POD....Tim
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/21/2015 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Tim!!! What an incredible honor!!
Date: 4/20/2015 2:43:00 PM
I'll see you down there Edwin !!!- Wow your romantic writes simply get better and better the imagery is divine - the ladies on soup will be flocking to read these wonderful words:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2015 3:33:00 PM
I've written a beach poem now :-) thanks for the inspiration - I love walking down on our local beach its bit too cold to paddle now lol:- hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/20/2015 3:26:00 PM
I thinks it's the ocean air. :) Making me light headed lol. Thank you Jan <3 <3
Date: 4/19/2015 11:02:00 PM
If you're trying to out do yourself, I think you should know, You're getting there!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/19/2015 11:07:00 PM
lol Thank you Judy!! What next? :) <3
Date: 4/19/2015 8:16:00 PM
Great write Edwin!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/19/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Wally :) I am honored. God bless. Ed
Date: 4/19/2015 7:18:00 PM
so much warmth xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/19/2015 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Thvia!! God bless! Ed
Date: 4/19/2015 7:09:00 PM
wow...love this write...the beach..the sky...rich with imagery and of course love...a fav Tim
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/19/2015 7:12:00 PM
This poem instantly became a favorite of mine as well. Thank you Tim!

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