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Candles On the Beach

Candles On The Beach

Watch the morning sun go down
holding hands while out on walks.
Words unspoken heard by hearts
waves gently kissing rocks.

A distant childs laughter rings
a ships whistle fills the air.
A stolen kiss upon a cheek
hands gently touching hair.

A window, or so it would seem
of opportunity.
Lovers hidden on the shore
no one else can see.

Turning quickly in the night
now facing one another.
Hear the turning of the tide?
A friend becomes a lover.

Falling softly in the sand
as passion fills their eyes.
Touching one another still
both touched by nighttime skies.

Seagulls crying from the clouds
their echoes from above. 
As they both find the sweet release
of lovers deep in love.

So much of love left yet to learn
so much for life to teach.
As two lovers passion burns
like two candles on the beach.

Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Konos Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 6:25 PM
It says "The Best New Poets Hot!" You're not hot! You're on FIRE!
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 3:26 AM
- What a beautiful and romantic poems, Edwin - Congratulations! - Well deserved p.o.t.d. ! - // Anne-Lise :)
Hofert Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 6:38 AM
Thank you so much Anne. It's truly an honor. Ed
Spagnola Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Thank you, you have descriptively place me in one of my favorite places in the world, jill
Hofert Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 6:39 AM
Then my mission was accomplished :) Thank you Jill. Ed
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April 21, 2015 at 8:41 PM
A beautiful, romantic write, Edwin. I enjoyed reading it tonight! Congrats on TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Thank you Rhonda very much. It's been a great day. :) God bless!
Williams Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Interesting melodrama.
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 9:12 PM
Not exactly what I would consider positive reinforcement but thank you for taking the time to comment. God bless Marilyn. Have a great week. :)
Diliberto Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 6:01 PM
is it any wonder it is the poem of the day? Congrats, beautiful. Loved it from beginning to the end.
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Thank you Mary I'm excited!! and honored! God bless.
Meade Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:11 PM
Enjoyed your poem today -- much love to learn indeed. Congrats.
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Thank you very much David. Blessings! Ed
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Oh Edwin I am delighted for you that this lovely poem has been honoured with Poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xxx
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Thank you Jan it really is quite an honor to me.
Seale Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 11:56 AM
beautiful poem
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Thank you Corenne. God bless. Ed
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Lovely images sweet and so much soft lines.. :)!!! COngrats on being chosen as poem of the day.. :)!//olive eloisa
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Thanks so much Olive!! It is such an honor and one I did not expect. God bless! Ed
Romaine Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Hey Edwin, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD!! This is a soft and lovely piece filled with wonderful imagery and warm love. Beautifully written and expressed. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Neva! I am very honored by being selected and overwhelmed by all of the encouragement. Blessings to you as well. :) Ed
Yvonne Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Love the title and how they are the last words of this soft romantic write. This speaks with a smooth romantic voice. A pleasure to read. Congratulations on your work being chosen poem of the day. A great choice!
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Maurice!! I cannot yet begin to say how honored and thrilled I am at this news myself. And dare I say flattered even? Even I never knew I had it in me. God bless my friend and thanks again! Ed
Roper Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Congratulations on Poem Of the Day. Good write a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Eve!!! Your message to me was the first I knew of this. What great news and what an honor. Thank you. Hugs.
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:01 AM
Congrats Edwin on POD....Tim
Hofert Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Tim!!! What an incredible honor!!
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 2:43 PM
I'll see you down there Edwin !!!- Wow your romantic writes simply get better and better the imagery is divine - the ladies on soup will be flocking to read these wonderful words:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 3:33 PM
I've written a beach poem now :-) thanks for the inspiration - I love walking down on our local beach its bit too cold to paddle now lol:- hugs Jan xx
Hofert Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 3:26 PM
I thinks it's the ocean air. :) Making me light headed lol. Thank you Jan <3 <3
Konos Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 11:02 PM
If you're trying to out do yourself, I think you should know, You're getting there!
Hofert Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 11:07 PM
lol Thank you Judy!! What next? :) <3
Flint Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Great write Edwin!
Hofert Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Thank you very much Wally :) I am honored. God bless. Ed
Shetley Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:18 PM
so much warmth xx
Hofert Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Thank you Thvia!! God bless! Ed
Smith Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:09 PM
wow...love this write...the beach..the sky...rich with imagery and of course love...a fav Tim
Hofert Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:12 PM
This poem instantly became a favorite of mine as well. Thank you Tim!
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