Candles of Love

Dancing candle flames,
On a frigid Winter night:
Sleeping wicks still smoke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deo Avatar
April 3, 2020 at 9:05 PM
"Sleeing wicks still smoke" is both beautiful and multi-faceted. shalom-shalom and thanks Raul
Thomas Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Three lines of dancing beauty Raul :)
Goff Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 9:04 PM
As expected, Raul...line 3 twist soars!
Tor Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Very nice Raul. Truly enjoyed,
Tor Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Where have you gone my friend. Miss you!!!!!!!!!!
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