Candles Lit, the Queen Sees to It

  
     The woman of the house glances at the clock
        Sabbath must be ushered in chic-chac*

     Friday eve, hers is the lead role for the People of the Book
        Sabbath one minute late, the Queen simply will not brook



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     *Transliteration of Hebrew slang for 'right away.'
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Jones Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 1:44 PM
I always learn from you! It is a pleasure Gershon! Love this one!
Wolf Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 8:29 PM
Alright! TYSM for letting me know, Karen. :) gw
Miller Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 8:26 AM
Blessings on you and your loved ones Gershon
Velasco Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 7:23 AM
Such grace and authority in preparing the Sabbath—beautifully captured.
DiMino Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 4:50 AM
Have a wonderful, deeply spiritual holiday. “Sabbath of Sabbaths” -- Blessings to you and your loved ones. Most precious day.
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 8:10 PM
It surprised me that women have a lead role in such an early religion. I'm glad that women are recognized. Thank you for the education.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 5:28 PM
I always appreciate your insightful couplets spiced with a touch of humor.
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